Reviews for God
Arlywn chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Im not sure how I feel about this. Its very short, and kinda cliff hanging, but in a way I think that works. Its confusing me because I want to see how the preacher reacts, but the simplicity makes me stop and wonder if its the girls innocence, or if she really is god... Great job
Pink Parfait chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Cute - the little girl is a bit 'creepy' though.
Galleena chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
The second coming perhaps? Best explaination I can come up with. :-) Actually, I quite liked the piece, it was sweet (though perhaps not intended to be?). I found it a little bit wordy eg. "euphemism thereof". But what can I say? I get them impression you did not write it too seriously.