|Reviews for The Shotgun|
| Leonard Rhine chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
It was very well done except for a few minor hiccups. But these are far and few, trust me, you definitely have something with this.
Anyway, and, yes, I do agree. I need to learn how to make my stories a little shorter.
| Dawley chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Hmm, fascinating little short story here. I really like the little line at the end that gives an explanation as to why exactly the guy has the shotgun with him.
Really well done, and it's actually a "proper" short, if I can call it that. My short is just over 7500... man, I need to learn to stop writing... :)