Reviews for I Always Thought Cupid Was a Boy
zephyr deity chapter 2 . 4/2/2007
"...propping her chin in her head..." - yeah, that sounds a little wrong.

I like how she has an "I love Jeannie" lunch box.

I'm loving this story so far.
zephyr deity chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
I like how things are sounding. It's definitely interesting. But wouldn't it be better - seeing as how this is in the first person - if the title was, "And You Thought Cupid Was A Boy"...?
Pyrgus chapter 2 . 3/27/2007
Nice. It was a bit short but im not really one to talk. I think it would have been a abit better if you had put a little more detail in it. you could have put how her mom died or something like that. unless it comes in a later point in the story, inwhichcase you should ignore me.


muchlove! and keep up the good work!

wecouldgoandget40s chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
You must continue with this story! The prologue seems VERY intriguing, I'm hooked on this story. Great job. Continue soon!
nemivicious chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
This sounds really promising, and I'd love to see what happens next. You've got great flow in your writing.
Holly chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Very promising. Hope you update soon. Will be keeping an eye of this piece. ;)
Pyrgus chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
INtersting. I like how this sort of seems like she is trying not to let her whole story come pouring out all at once.


can't wait for more!

Juliet21691 chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
That sounds like a really good idea for a story keep going with it i'm sure it will be great.