|Reviews for We're Doing That Thing Again|
| Duerre chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
A lame attempt at poetry and its in the wrong section. You talk about him getting stoned? Where is the passion and emotion, it would sound better coming from a six year old rather than being read, by someone who I assume to be much older.
You could have used better words as well.
| kris.con chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Definitely wrong category...
A haiku is a short japanese poem about nature, usually written in three lines with a 5-7-5 syllable count.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
I like it...but this isn't a haiku. At least, not the kind of haiku I'm use to.
Thanks for the review!
| little smiles chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Well, I won't say I can relate to this, because I've never known anyone who got stoned, and I've never really felt that way myself. But what this did give me was some kind of understanding. I always marvel at how poets can put so much feeling into just a few lines. I love the image the second stanza gave me, of lying on your bed with your stereo on full volume. I liked it a lot :)