Hey, so i just happen to come across your story, and I have to say, it's "okay". There are somethings you need to work on doing, like writing in the correct tenses. And you should really spell check your work.

I want you to take my words to heart, not in a bad way. I am in no way dissing your story at all, because I really do like it. I think it's interesting. Not exactly my style, with all the ghosts and whatnot, that stuff I really don't get, but maybe you should add more depth to the characters. They all sound extremely 'blah', like they really have no personality. Well, except for Brooke and Ashley, and that's because you tried to make them into cliche's.

All in all, your story is alright, but I definately wouldn't favorite it. I'll put an alert on it, however, and when you update, I'll get back to you.

Oh! That reminds me. You should really update your story more often. It's been FOREVER since you updated, and i think you may lose some reviewers and their attention if you wait to long.

Well thanks for listening to me rant.

-Hayley

Wow, oh my gosh.

I never would have suspected that in like, a million years!

That's so crazy to even think about, you know?

Well, I'll just patiently sit here and wait for your next update.

UPDATE SOON THIS TIME! :)

Gosh, I was waiting since July! LOL.

omfg! is it really jack's dad?

please update soon!

Oh my gosh! That's wicked scary! You had better update soon. This is awesome!

Ohh I'm scared. Write more ASAP!

Okay, Jack was mean in this chapter, but Alissa's phobia is very amusing. About "you're" and "your"; you're is a contraction standing for 'you are' and your shows possession. Jessica doesn't own the next so it's "You're next."

UPDATE SOON!

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Oh my! That's not good.

I wonder what Jessica meant by, "you're next". That makes you seriously think!

Did she do something to someone? And she's telling them you're next, as in, she's going to do that same thing to them?

Uh-oh. And I thought Jessica was the good ghost! I was actually liking her character a little, before I relized she was nasty.

Again, I repeat, UH OH. Well, I'm done with my review, bye!

Love, Emily

So I just read it and I REALY like it. Um... The last chapter; Jack knows about Jessica's ghost right?

Geesh this would be creepy.

I love it though.

Update soon!

Oh...so Jessica is finally showing up at Alissa's house? That's great (well, not for Alissa, but you know what I mean). Please update!

No offense, but her mother sounds really mean. I LOVE THIS STORY! The entire 'Jessica is a ghost thing' is interesting. If Alissa looks so much like her... Just a question...What's APUSh?

UPDATE SOON!

I'd love to see how this develops. It's really different from anything else I've read.

UPDATE SOON!

Wait, Jack said "It's okay...I know" so he knows Liv can see Jessica? That's so creepy! Oh man. Please update soon. This is great.

So, is Jessica back in ghost form? Interesting...Ooh! Is she here to give a warning to Alissa? Possibly one that has to do with a murderer? Oh, and sorry, I forgot you said Alissa moved a lot. Please update!

holy shit thats creepy i just got the chills

OH, a ghost!

Or maybe not? Perhaps Jessica never actually died, she just faked it really well. Or maybe she actually is dead, but this is like a thing from the Mediator by Meg Cabot. Freaky.

Ok, you have my attention now, and I am dying to find out what the heck is going on. Kudos, props, and all that good stuff to you.