Reviews for Never Again
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 12/22/2008

So beautiful in a horrible way.

I like the way it all ties together...and I can see that happening. Very realistic, very lyrical, and I commend you for your tastefulness on a sensitive subject.

I like the way you called the veins "baby blue" as he is ending his life, kind of a circle between beginning and end.

Or maybe I'm just making stuff up.

Anyway, wonderful, wonderful. (:
almostthegoldenchild chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
very sad. The words/phrasing are perfect. they potray the feeling of raw pain to the reader. Its more then that. It also pretray hos easy is. How people have different coping mechanisms for pain and loss. How addictive it can become weather its a good doping mechanism or bad one
Perfect Denial chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Wow! i really liked it! even though it was sad and depressing. i thought you did an awesome job!
Pandaemonic Paradigm chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Wow. This is incredibly dramatic, but amazing. I love it. You have me uncomfortably clutching my wrists to myself imagining it.
rockNrollROMANTIC chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
the story of my life

and unless you do it

you cant understand

the complussion

The urge

that cannot be ignored

and once you start you cannot stop

it is always an option

always a choice

that usually wins over talking
aridelaine chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
I really liked this and it captured what alot of people go through. The repetition was important and added to the poem. I must say it awesome! Keep writing!