Reviews for Fairytales |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My optimistic side hopes the guy will turn to notice her. My negative side tells me there's a slim chance that's going to happen. Here's hoping. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So ture. It sucks when they never notice what is right in front of their eyes. I spent a year like that. But don't worry, if they are right for you they will look up sooner or later. I love the ending. Great job as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The pain of teenage angst... You capture the emotion very well without all the melodrama that usually accompanies this topic. Some of the lines could be organized differently: "I waved at you but you ignored and looked away." for example might read better as: "I waved at you but you ignored me, looked away." "that life and fairytales just don’t combine." I don't like the use of 'combine' in this line. I'm not really sure why. I love the ending. It is very strong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made me pretty sad. I totally relate, that is probably why. Great job, God bless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's good and so true |