My optimistic side hopes the guy will turn to notice her. My negative side tells me there's a slim chance that's going to happen.

Here's hoping.

So ture. It sucks when they never notice what is right in front of their eyes. I spent a year like that. But don't worry, if they are right for you they will look up sooner or later. I love the ending. Great job as always.

The pain of teenage angst... You capture the emotion very well without all the melodrama that usually accompanies this topic.

Some of the lines could be organized differently:

"I waved at you but you ignored and looked away."

for example might read better as:

"I waved at you but you ignored me, looked away."

"that life and fairytales just don’t combine."

I don't like the use of 'combine' in this line. I'm not really sure why.

I love the ending. It is very strong.

This made me pretty sad. I totally relate, that is probably why. Great job, God bless.

that's good and so true