|Reviews for Fairytales|
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
My optimistic side hopes the guy will turn to notice her. My negative side tells me there's a slim chance that's going to happen.
| CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
So ture. It sucks when they never notice what is right in front of their eyes. I spent a year like that. But don't worry, if they are right for you they will look up sooner or later. I love the ending. Great job as always.
| believe-in-futures chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
The pain of teenage angst... You capture the emotion very well without all the melodrama that usually accompanies this topic.
Some of the lines could be organized differently:
"I waved at you but you ignored and looked away."
for example might read better as:
"I waved at you but you ignored me, looked away."
"that life and fairytales just don’t combine."
I don't like the use of 'combine' in this line. I'm not really sure why.
I love the ending. It is very strong.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
This made me pretty sad. I totally relate, that is probably why. Great job, God bless.
| Juliet21691 chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
that's good and so true