|Reviews for Raea's Song: Junior Chronicles Book One|
| Kanehila chapter 3 . 9/4/2007
hehe, my sister's name is maggie! X3 i'll hafta tell her that :) (and she is pretty popular and social n' stuff...how funny XD)
but this is so cool! the question of why she's having to act who she's not and what her power is is killing me! one suggestion for that though is that you make little remarks about it. you know what the whole deal is, but the readers don't, so you could write little teasers about whats going through Raea's head when things happen like 'i'll have to be carefull if i do that' or such. just to makes the readers go insane. cause i'm kinda sad right now that there hasn't been any mention of her mystery since the first chapter :( but keep up the good work! it's coming along nicely
| Batgirl A-ray chapter 2 . 9/3/2007
I like it. It's very good so far. I hope to see more soon.
But I'd like to point out one thing, when the kids we're at the dinner table.
Curtis didn't look up from his bowl, "Meh, it was okay."
That part, I'm thinking you meant Carter but I could be wrong. But I enjoy this story tremendously. Please add more soon.