Holy. Fucking. Shit. Even though I have only read one chapter, this is one of the best pieces of work I have ever read. And not just on this website, I mean in general, and I read a lot. I don't know if you take workshops or something for your writing but your style is amazing. Usually I can't stand to read a lot of stories on FP or FF because of the horrendous grammar, spelling and style, but yours is just amazing. Also, I love your imagery it's fucking spectacular. After reading this first chapter u had to log in and tell you this, even if meant struggling for 5 minutes trying to type in my long ass password. Like 10 times. That is how much I am already loving this story.

wow this was so good, but right now i cant finsih it when i do i let you know what i think. I wanna no whats up with John and stuff, cause in the summary wasnt it like some magical book or something all well guess that hasnt come in yet. toodles.

M. It's good. (Yah, that sounded like I was eating food or something, but I meant "m" in a different way. Just to clarify.)

My interst is quite piqued.

~nabbi

I found the prologue quite gripping with the thematic concerns and the note at the end. As for the first chapter, I think you went too far with describing everything and Meg's life. I liked the cliff hanger at the end, however, and I will continue reading. Please check out my own stories and review them!

What a great way to end the story! Lots of action, plently of description, and enough closure that it's statisfying. I'm glad that Meg is trusting John a bit. That was a good way to end it. They're not madly in love, but she's starting to trust him.

This was an excellent story and I can't wait for you to start another novel! Congrats on finishing! :-D

The prologue of this story was the most confusing, but informative; sad, but funny; and, most of all, suspenseful. Truly well done, I'll definitely be reading this in the future.

Hm... Very interesting addition. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Excellent last two chapters! I'm getting really slow at reading-reviewing. Yikes. I feel so bad for Meg, learning the truth about John the way she did. Yay for John not giving up. I can't wait to read the next chapter! :-D

He hit her... Seriously? Why? And he didn't even apoligize specifically about that... That makes me mad at him... Lying and hitting a girl is really bad... Hm.

More soon? I can't decide whether I'm super mad at John or not.

that was so awesome! when's the nxt update? i can't wait! gives me the thrills...lol!

Awesome chapter! Jonathan's world is really falling apart now! I hope Jim doesn't tell anyone because I don't think things would go so well for him. I do hope Jon comes clean to Meg about what's really going on.

Please update soon! :-D

Great chapter! My head is swimming with all the info! Wow. I can't wait to see how this all comes together! Keep up the excellent work! :-D

Very good, can't wait to see what will happen with Meg next!

Prty good from what I've seen, I like the concept at the prologue that your life is planned out for you the moment your born, though that idea has already been put up a long time ago. I liked the first chapter and descriptions, especially about the guy with the spit, which I thought was kinda amusing. I was a bit confused at the ending, maybe it's just me. I like.

Wow, you weren't kidding about a lot happening in this chapter! I'm so sad that Zeke is dead, though I had a sneaking suspiscion that he would die. Johnathan really seems to be coming around to the good side (Yay!) and I do hope that he can use his love for Meg in order to save her from Aloysius and Gregor. I think if anyone could beat this kind of bloodline curse, it would be Meg and Johnathan.

It must be horrible for him to know that his father killed his mother and Meg's mother and now just had Meg's grandfather killed. Poor John. Is Nate dead too or does it just seem like he is? It really seems to feel like he's dead, but then again John seems so focused on Zeke, that I'm not entirely sure.

This was an excellent chapter, so keep up the brillant work and please, PLEASE update soon! :-D