|Reviews for affliction|
| Around.about chapter 7 . 5/11/2007
I loved the last three. Angry and elegant.
The style annoyed me a bit at first, but it seems fitting like quotes ripped out of a book, or perhaps from life it's self.
My favorite was "idontknow", but they where all well written.
| Frosted Midnight chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
ahh cigarettes the stick of death. i like this.
| she smolders chapter 5 . 4/9/2007
Why is it that the ones we fall for, aren't really the 'right' ones? This is just amazing.
| b-U-b-TRUE chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
this is very good. I love the metaphor and the rhyming of addiction and infliction. Great job.
| she smolders chapter 3 . 3/30/2007
"as if i knew what love was & as if anyone knows how to even begin to understand it." - That's so true, I agree. I think I worry about the trivial too much too. I love love these pieces. :)
| she smolders chapter 2 . 3/30/2007
The old 'juliet and romeo' analogy always tugs at my heart.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
The imagery in this is amazing.