Reviews for i came in darkness
re x invented chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
the first two lines sold it to me. everything else was just beautiful. i love vague poems with seemingly no meaning, they are the most direct windows into the soul.

_till tonight do us part
Guy The Writer chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
good stuff. Its a very unique concept of using the moon in such a way.

creative much? P
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
interesting concept and formatting

different but nicely written

(second stanza filled with a lot of emotion)
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
Really interesting. Well written. I rather like it.
DrownASiren chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
I like it; short and sweet

I'm not too sure about the "thy" and the "cometh" though. The old English isn't consistent through the poem, and it kind of bogs that line down; and I'd add a line to the opening stanza to mirror the final one. Good, though.
katrina chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
I like this, especially the middle stanza. [to bear the words (lies) and scars/(TRUTHS) and this broken body;] is my favorite. I'm not sure I understand the signifigance (sp?) of the moon being a woman though.