I stayed up all night reading this whole story...T_T

lol, I like it a lot. It's really interesting, and, even though it's fairly long, the plot hasn't gotten boring.

the only think i would like to request would be that you clarify the words that are in the Garnet language. I have trouble keeping them straight.

OMG, I somehow missed your last update! yay, two new chapters for me ;)

anyway I really like the way things are progressing and I'm sure they will work it out somehow (hopefully soon... why can't they talk with each other *frustrated* but that's the way things are way too often in real life ;_;) ...you know what? I seem to like the last few paragraphs of every chapter the best. they are always so emotional and it's just heartbreaking this time.

best wishes for your NANO and thanks for the new chapter - or in my case two new chapters :)

wow... I read all of your stories and I've loved everyone. I am amazed that after reading all of them I still love the complexity of your characters and the flow of your stories. I've seen you grow as a writer and just wanted to say keep going.

Communication would be key, if only they would talk to each other about this!

But, I guess that's why you're such a good writer. You know this, and you know how to build suspense, and anguish in your readers. I truly admire you for that, so, I must thank you.

Thank you for sharing this chapter, and never ceasing to amaze us with your words!

THANK YOU! I love this story :D And I like how its going :) I just LOVE your stories they are really really awesome I get really happy when a new update comes XD So, until next time! :) (Which I hope its real soon; can't wait for more!

That was a great chapter. I'm so glad you found time to update it. I was afraid with the NaNo, that you wouldn't find the time. Plus, with your other story, which I haven't been able to get into like this series, I figured there wouldn't even be an update this month. My heart was breaking for Solas and for Faelan. If they only knew what the other really wanted, things would be so hard. Sometimes it's so hard to verbalize your feelings. But, I'm glad that are finally settled in together. I hope the fact that they haven't actually consummated the mating, that it won't cause problems with the bastards that were against the mating. Anyway, can't wait for more. You are an awesome writer. I love it when stories are written so well that I can picture every aspect of the story so vividly in my mind that the characters and places seem so real. Great job. I found another MPREG story the other day by accident. It's actually a fanfic, which I usually don't read, but since I'm not familiar with the show and because I also thinks it's so far off cannon, that it's not really a fanfic. But it's an amazing story and the writing style seems a lot like yours. There are like 37 chapters already and the author seems to update almost twice a week. You might be interested in reading it. It's very good. Sucks you in, just like your stories. Here's the link hemrage./.

Aw, sad chapter, solas seems so confused and lonely in a way and Faelan is so conflicted. I can't wait for the next chapter, I really like this story.

The first night that Solas was laying on the bed naked and crying I thought Faelan should explain to him why he didn't touch him. Now Solas is gonna misunderstand and think that its 'cause that Devin guy didn't want him. Poor Solas and Faelan. Won't anything go right for them?

they are finally bonded *_* I know that you are busy but... Please pretty please: update!

I'm not exactly shure why I hesitate so much in reading this series.

And after I started I saw myself completely addicted to this!

You rulz man. I love the two prequels to this and now...

Must confess that I have totally hated 'Devan' since he kept Anila after Solas, and fora while I thought he was really gonna be Solas mate.

I so glad Faelan has come! He's awesome xD No need to tell that I'm in luv with him. And I totally wanna see their first night!

Whats next, whats next.

Oh Faelan is very considerate and I'm glad they're bond. they make a good couple.

Solas is so cute!

I feel sorry for Bairre I want him to be bonded! :( I dont know for some reason I think he needs his own story one that mirrors his recklessness. Seems to me he's only falling for Faelan not because he really "loves" him but because his papi wants him to and keeps driving it to him that he has to bond with Faelen. I want to see Bairre sleep with one of Faelen's crew member who has been secretly in love with him forever and get pregnant BUT Bairre doesn't really want to so it comes as a surprise when he gets pregnant and he is made to bond with him and made to live on his ship where he learns to stop being so bitter and angry and let someone show him what real love is about..."sigh" Wishful thinking and now...ONTO the BONDING!

Whoa! Bonded already? Love your stories cant wait! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!