Reviews for Tearc Dragan
Wolfy just ain't logged in chapter 8 . 12/17/2007
Yee,I've been waiting for this! Poor Solas. It's too bad Devin wasn't punished more badly, but it's ok. At least Solas got the ship.
Keiria Encrypt chapter 7 . 12/10/2007
This chapter was cool, can't wait till you update...
merrymowmow chapter 7 . 11/24/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
distortedreflection chapter 7 . 9/19/2007
“I haven’t a clue,” Dragan replied softly as he trialed after the boy. He saw that they got a few strange looks from those they passed but no one approached the boy. Dragan stopped behind Solas as the boy looked out the windows, although he really couldn’t see much, he knew that that Solas was looking for the Tearc Dragan. “You can’t see the Tearc from here.”

Your spelt trailed wrong though I'm sure unintentionally. And you wrote that twice.

Solas smiled and followed Moria out into the main room; he saw Blair look up from where he was coloring with the doctor. Solas went back over to finish his coloring with Blair as Moria sat down across from them. Moria watched them for several long minuets as he slowly ran a hand over his stomach. He could feel the child, and with a small smile, he let his mind drift.

You spelt minutes wrong.

I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next one.


darrena chapter 7 . 9/16/2007
Yay! I'm glad Dragan had his language knowledge updated. :) Lovely chapter.
Chrnoskitty chapter 7 . 9/13/2007

Another chapter done.

I love it. Solas is awesome. He seems... unstable? In the mind, but that's all too be expected, ain't it.

I hope the Garnet Council do something to Devin. Like... I dunno. Something bad.

Anywhoo ~ Keep Writing! We all love you!
Wolfwitch chapter 7 . 9/13/2007
Can't wait to see more!
Ruri Star Sykel chapter 7 . 9/13/2007
AWE! sorry but i love this story and i love Linos! And i want Linos to be with Solas and love him! *hugs Linos and Solas* Kawaii!


Solas: DRAGON!


jma chapter 7 . 9/12/2007
Yay! More! As always, you did a great job and left me wanting more... And more... and more... It almost kills me to realize that a chapter is over! -sighs- Until next time!
kiki chapter 7 . 9/12/2007
Devin is really a bastard! I wonder if it's possible for Dragon to become 'human' garnet guy... That way, they can mate together or something like that...
darrena chapter 6 . 8/31/2007
Loved this chapter. :)
Mewenn chapter 6 . 8/29/2007
I don't know what to think about Devin but the more I learn the less I like him… But what the hell was Solas thinking when he decided to bond with him?
jma chapter 6 . 8/25/2007
I get so excited every new chapter that comes up and then so sad when I am done and realize I have to wait for more... -sniffle- More soon? Please?
tmelange1 chapter 6 . 8/22/2007
Interesting story. I've enjoyed reading it, and have only really had an issue with what seemed to me to be Devin's abrupt change from a really nice guy in the first few chapters to a true asshole in the last. Now, it is a little hard to stay interested in him because he has no redeeming qualities. LOL Otherwise, I thought the story was great. Kudos.
bambi4real chapter 6 . 8/20/2007
That was good. I think devin is still an ass though. The real ignorant guy kind of came from left field. I mean he just started insulting Cy without any really didn't have much indication of the animosity that some people have towards the altered boys. I mean I figure some people must not be too happy with the relationship with the aliens.
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