i hate Devin.

Faelan behaves like a little girl, just sulking, while Solas tries really hard. I know Faelan is hurt but then he should just see a psychologist bevor he loses his family.

Thank you, really good twist in the plot! Can't wait for more!

their bond is getting better. it's a good news indeed.

so sad... yet.. i'd like to say, that maybe it shouldn't be a quick fix. maybe it needs to be a gradual awakening. something ''instant'' or ''miraculous'' would really cheapen the layer upon layer of suffering that Solas has endured.

can't wait to see how this develops. :)

Oh man, you just write so well!

I was tearing up while reading this chapter!

I understand it must be hard for Faelan, but he should be slapped.

Twice.

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i agree this chapter was really sad and I read it 3 times before I did this review, its like i coudn't belive that was the end of the chapter.

Oh my god. There are actually tears in my eyes after reading that! It was completely heartbreaking but I suppose that is a compliment to your writing skills. And just so you know I rarely cry at novels and there you go, you big bully. You made me cry. I hope you're satisfied (you should be - the chapter was absolutely amazing). So please, please update as soon as you can because chances are I'm going to end up re-reading this chapter a lot before you update...because I'm a masochist like that. Thankyou for the chapter (:

This is one of the most heartbreaking chapter I have ever read. I'm still crying over it, my heart just breaks for Solas.

please update sooN!

I have spent the last 5 days reading the garnetier series and I have to say you have got talent. I could not stop reading! I've been awake for almost 5 days! This is just that good. I can't wait for the next chapter and will there be another after this? and What became of Alma and her father? Please update soon (but give me a few days to catch up on sleep).

Thanks for the stories!

OH-EMM-GEE

I LOVE this!

i can't wait for the next chapter and what else will come. Thank you for writing such an amazing story!

I have to admit that I think that Devin and Borgan had easy deaths. As for Anila...I kind of think her punishment is lenient too! I guess Faelan is a nicer being than I am. :)

I don't want to be mean, but they got what they deserved except for Linos, I liked him (or will he make it?). I love it that Faelan is able to shift, that's really cool.

Thank you, can't wait for more!

*Ding-Dong! Devin's dead and his girlfriend got what came to her!* What a great chapter! So much happened all in one chapter too. I expected this part of the story to take at least another chapter before they got Solas back, but all's well that ends well.

Faelan can actually turn into an animal? I knew he had animal characteristics, but I wasn't expecting this. Plus he's green! That totally rocks! The only thing that would make this story better would be if there were 20 more chapters.

Yea! New chappie. I'm so excited. I really love all of your characters. Keep up the good work.