Reviews for Love Ya, Unc |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw that was the cutest, strangest chapter ever, it made me giggle. Chocolate ah food of the Gods. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! Words can not describe my love with it! Argh! You HAVE to update soon! PLEASE! The whole Scott and Lacy sexual tension is driving me crazy! :) xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw poor crazy Lacy how you've got to love her. Cant wait for more updates and however much I may love Sasha cant wait for something to happen with Scott. JM |
![]() ![]() JULIA! I am so happy! I loved this chapter. Since I'm ready this in the middle of class I couldn't laugh out loud, so I think a few times I may have looked like I was about to explode. There was only one problem. The last big paragraph, where Lacy beats up the couch. You might want to say that she went home. Because it seemed like she just randomly pulled off her pants. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! new chapter! nice. :) love the humour. ... at least the cow is dead! It's better than it being alive xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! FINALLY! *Glares* I should destroy you for taking so long to post a chapter. Oh, I love Phineas and Wiggins. *giggles manically while chewing on a paper man's head* There's not much point in leavinga sane review, since you're hearing what I think of your story as I type this. Whatever, it was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I forgot how much I love Lacy talk. Hell, /I'd/ date Lacy, given she was real, and not straight. teehee. I love the way this story is narrated. With every fiber of my being. It's just...amazing. *fangirls* I'm so glad you're back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's funny anyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has to be a ball to write. Gravy...only on Sunday... D Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, firstly isnt this incest? which is illegal in many states of the US? secondly, your charchters are well developed, and the conversation b/w lacy and her friends is good, scott is a good character... but incest is gross! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I find some duct tape in Scott’s couch (don’t ask, I don’t know either) " Best line ever written! Seriously, have you met my friends are something? I once found a spoon in my friend's purse. Once my friend was digging through mine and she found a pair of socks. I have no idea how they got there. That's only the beginning. Love, ~Dia |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is hilarious! It is just like having fun with your friends, it is awesomely fun to read. Love, ~Dia |
![]() ![]() ![]() Need I say that I love this? This is very good as always, and I love how you say what Lacy's saying in her narration and then put what she really means next to it in parentheses. Love it! It reminds me of my soap where the fact that two characters are closely related seems to just disappear when some writer decides that the actors are cute together... but it's much better than that! Love, ~Dia |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute story though it gets confusing at times and you should probably insert line breaks after each scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been far too long between me reading the chapter and actually reviewing. Anyway, both 12 and thirteen have had their excellent brand of humor, and I'm wondering if I should start worrying about the condition of Lacy's mentality... or if it's far too late for that by now. |