Reviews for Love Ya, Unc |
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![]() ![]() ![]() CUTE as always! But...:(...i miss Sasha lolz ;p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right! Well, I've noticed something within your review responses that kind of upset me. I totally LOVE this story AND the way you write! It's decidedly WACKY and off-the-wall and...ahem...*blushes furiously* Things are great the way they are, though there's definitely some hidden unrequited love going on, which is rather sad for our characters given their relation. (now coming to my point) Their relation, however, is what makes the story so intriguing. I almost think I'd be disappointed and bored if you decided to have them find out that their relation miraculously really doesn't exist at all. It would like totally make it a so "done before soap opera", whereas, now it's completely ORIGINAL and wacky. I mean, you wrote it yourself: "Scott. You and I are the epitome of weird. There's no vertical anymore, only horizontal." If their world is so horizontal why should incest make a bit of difference? You've also stated that they're both very practiced in not giving a hoot 'bout what anyone else thinks so what's the point in getting all bunched up over it. To me, it would be out of character for them to be all bunched up about it anyway. It just seems like the 'natural', though decidedly PERVERSE, progression of their relationship. *shrugs* What? I don't condone it- not that it MATTERS what I do or do NOT condone- but it works for this story. *nods* Yah. Because you're that GOOD of a writer. Looking forward to Scotty galore so..."Feed me, Seymore." :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() *smirks* Oh!...And did I mention that I think Scott said he loved her out of obligation in an attempt to convince HIMSELF it were true too? No? Well, I do. I also LOVE Scott. Sasha's fun...undeniably, but alas he is no Scott. *sighs dreamily* What? I can't help it! You've written him so YUMMY. He completely owns the room with all his charisma. Whoo! *fans herself incessantly* And what's worse-or better- he's not all "I'm God's gift to women" about it either. He's just...WOW...too delish for words.(she blinks, wiping the fake drool oozing from her gaping mouth while blushing absolutely FURIOUSLY) Right then! And we're moving on...(ducks her head, staring at her, now FASCINATING, socked feet) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *giggles evily* Personally, I think Scott's been setting her up since forever with 'non-worthy' guys because he SUBCONSIOUSLY didn't want her to have anyone with true potential for more... And the reason for the sudden 'worthiness' of Sasha is because Scott doesn't only have a subconscious awareness of his feelings for her anymore. Now he genuinely needs Lacey to have someone and her to be happy with them hoping that maybe, knowing that she's truly happy with someone will cause him to not think of her in that way anymore. I also think it's the same reason he stayed with Janet as long as he did. HE himSELF needed a distraction from Lacey... Now the poor guys miserable, feeling like he's the bubonic plague for liking his niece in that way...and with no distractions (though I don't believe he TRULY WANTS a distraction because he really wants Lacey, and what's the point in fighting what he knows is true) he's stuck thinking about what he can't have AND how weird he is for wanting it... The poor guy really does need some vodka 'bout now me thinks. *winces at his predicament* *shrugs* Though 'tis DECIDEDLY sick and twisted...I hope he...*blushes furiously* Right then! Moving on to next chappie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, i like the last part, with the letter XD and no! i don't know what happened to plinky! i wish i did because i miss her?/their? stories! they were so random and fun... ::sad face:: |
![]() ![]() You make me laugh. Especially the whole "peeping Tom" thing. I remember when you came up with Tom "Greenie." Anyways, great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilariously funny! I love how random she is...and I love the fact that I can actually follow her non-logic. Very well written, author-dear! Keep up the excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHAHAHA loved the letter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahaha, you never fail to have your story be realistic and hilarious at the same time. I hope the date goes well, and Chloe's not a whatsherface. D: I can never make those ice-cream-cone-towel-things. o_o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boo is Colin's. You're logic is so...ah...warped. Yeah, that'll work. The letter at the end was...you're a freak. In the good, I can't wait to see you again kind of way. Naturally. It just reflects in your stories. #Thumbs up# |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! This story works on so many levels it's original, it's funny and it's romantic too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter. i can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() In my last review I was totally complimenting ! Very happy to see a new chapter! The phone conversation was a teensy weensy bit confusing, but I also read it really fast, so it was probally just me. Can't wait for the next chapter. Yippee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OKAY! I realy like this story so...UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww i love it, and i get the peanut butter and fluff bit now, lol, chloe wasnt using lacy to get to scott was she? cos i like chloe, although, if she does wind up with scott it will add a complication to the story...hm...interesting...anywho's good chappy, i wanna know what his reaction to the phone conversation is *rubs hands together* |