O it's gonna get heated up in there

W00t

I wanna see what goes on with the whole Lacy-Scott-Janet thing.

Wah I wanna see what Janet says about Lacy on Scott.

Mhm.

Oh, how I love the descriptive random-ness that takes place.

It's lurvley.

(L)

AHA DEAR LORD

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!

Oh man, all these questions are things I'd probably ask at lunch with my friends.

Tsk tsk, poor Sasha.

Bahahaha Lacy and Chloe are like me and my bestest buddy Mel.

Tee hee SO EXCITED to read the rest.

AHH lol I love it so far

Excited to read the rest!

Yet another interesting little chapter... was definately smiling after a certain point in the story, and while I didn't outright laugh... hey, as long as you can still make me smile, it's all good. And now for the thing hat lacy thinks might be a date, and Sasha... well, we don't know what he thinks, yet. However, I look forward to seeing how said date goes in the next chapter.

POW! There, since I know its hard for imaginary people to get hold of guns and all. Wee! Poor Lacy...stuck with a guy she likes in a dark movie theatre during a gorey horror movie. Whatever will she do? Another great chapter and so on. :D

I love the story, keep going! Tt's kind of weird isn't it, the uncle and the niece but the age difference could totally happen as it does in my family-mom's side.

Can't wait till the next chapter comes out!

Um, Dev, what are you talking about? This is great! I like it. It's crucial to the story.

There may have been quite the amount of drama in this, but at least parts did make me smile. Question: You sure Lacy has a sane brain?

Otherwise, I look forward to seeing how the situation we've currently hit resolves in the upcoming chapters that I nkow you'll write.

O! I am a ghost! I wnted to leave a really stupid review since I already told you what I thought, but I was too depressed at the end. By "depressed" I mean that I wasn't on the normal giggle-high that I normaly am after reading this story. Poor Scott!

gah. you must write more. im hooked. oh when, oh when, will the incest begin?

i like the sarcastic/off-beat humor of it all.

can't wait to read more.

Cutem.

:]

Lacy is sweet, if slightly insane.

And wondering how this whole incest thing is going to work out.

Also... the names. Remind me of Scott & Lacy Peterson, and make me slightly distrust Scott.

" I will skewer you with a shish kebab stick"

Statements tend to flow. This would flow better as "I'll make a shish kebab out of you" or "I'll make you into a shish kebab" or "I'll run you through with a skewer" or something.

"See, Scott is my uncle"

Erase the see.

"I got more human-like, and we became friends."

I would change the 'got' to 'became'.

"“protecting me,”"

That comma should be outside the quotation marks.

"unpickable.”"

Period outside the quotation marks.

That's all I noticed.

Will this be incest? Actually I'll probably forget to read even if it is. XD I only dig boy x boy incest now. Sucks for me. XD

I like this line best, I think: he has kept me (too) safe, (socially) unavailable, and (in)sane.

And based on the summary, and that they look nothing alike, I figure they'll end up not biologically related. ?

I do like this, though, and I think I'll keep reading. It's cute, and short, and sweet. Plus, guys named Sasha must be fun.

How could you? Link is the man. And the line just above that is actually kinda creepy. You know, it seems like you would actually do that "Greenie" thing to some poor guy if he was in the wrong place at the wrong time. Poor people...

this is the funniest FP story i have read in a while...its AWESOME...i seriously cannot wait till you update next because unlike the other stories there is so much humor and romance that it is not all lovey dovey and sappy, like the other stories I'm reading...but yeah update soon...:D