great chpter I really hope Scott and Lacey get together soon XD

good lord I LOVE this story with a passion! I wish I was living in it! pleze update A-SAP!

spent my entire sunday morning and afternoon reading this whole story, and found that it's amazing and you should update quite soon :]

AGGHH! *spazzes out* You updated! I knew it was coming, and yet the shock almost killed me. When I saw the email sitting there in my inbox "FP New Chapter" I just about licked the screen. Great chapter! You had BETTER NOT take a MILLION YEARS to add the next chappy! It is just getting REALLY good. I can barely STAND the tension. You must update SOON. Or I'll fire you as my beta. *nods* Yep yep.

Oh, loved the note conversation. So funny.

Do you know how long I've been waiting for this update? It seems like YEARS. You really need to update more missy. Haha. Really good chapter though. All I can say is FINALLY Scott and Lacy got together. They are adorable together, and the fact that they are so close makes it even better. Update ASAP

*sigh* I am such a freakish fangirl that I actually went back and read this chapter again. I miss it. UPDATE, DAMN YOU!

Now I understand why you say my chapters are so long, cause yours are so short! lol. :P Lacy is such a total spaz. "Goodness, he knows! Oh, Goodness is my imaginary friend, by the way. I love you, Goodness!" Bwahahaha.

Hi. Thanks for your review! Here's mine in return as promised.

Okay I've read the first two chapters so far...

I enjoyed the interesting and very humorous dialogue. There are actually a few funny moments, particularly when the central character was talking to the principal and said something about some of the boys in the school not having broken their voice yet.

However I do have a problem with your writing in the present tense. Why do you do that?

Quote: he has kept me (too) safe, (socially) unavailable, and (in)sane.

And this is the other odd thing. Didn't work for me, didn't really understand what you were trying to do either. But maybe's that's just me. :P

Also I would have liked it if you'd introduced some conflict in the story because a good story always always has conflict. But maybe I'm wrong this time, I don't know, since the genre is Romance/Humour, in which case ignore me. :)

All in all quite interesting. I'd love to read on. :)

Haha, I loved the ending of this chapter.

You better update this by the time I get to the last chapter Jules!

-Kat

Um...Kinda need that sequel Jules. Waiting...

yay you're alive! :)

more more more! *waits*

Warm laundry is so nice and it's soo fun to just get clothes out of the dryer and shove your face in them and smell and be all happy~ XD

This was another very amusing chapter, though Lacy's all over the place.

...Actually, that's so much better than the cliche romance novel heroines who are like 'I DON'T NEED GUYS' or 'I HATE YOU BUT I LOVE YOU' or stuff like that - I mean, it's okay when it's done right but sometimes it gets really old.

Anyway yeah. Sasha's cute. And Hey Jude can totally be screamo. D

~indy

PS this is the last review for now since I've gotta do work. Ugh.

AHAHAHA that was a great ending. And I loved the weird/interesting introductions and whatnot.

Sasha's answers are also quite epic and I commend you on that. XD I love Scott and Lacy's relationship... and the name Lacy in general.

Mmkay. First - to change my pen name, then - onto the next chapter! XD

~indy

Ah, hello. I kind of forgot about my FP account but... here I am! And I'm sorry if this review isn't all that. I'm so tired.

But I like the start of this. You kind of spend a little much time going over the whole back story of Scott and Chloe, but it's entertaining and I think it'll be interesting to read the next chapter. Hehe. I'm glad you sent me the link!

~indigo

ARE YOU NUTS LADY? God, this is just so wrong...its like, its like...Flying pigs dating janet jackson wrong! How could you not write chapter 22? I spent all this time reading chapter 1-21 with out freaking moving (thats a lie I did so much since my attention span is really-moving on). Then there is no more chapters for me to click on. Seriously, I am like two seconds away from releasing like a flying pg/janet jackson spawn on you and it is not pretty! So update!

(on a nice note, I adore the story and if you updated I would be very happy-I'd probably make Santa look unhappy, thats how happy).