Reviews for Incomplete Lover
Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Woah, I feel so sorry for this guy. He kinda reminds me of the Devil. Great poem.
Captured Dawn chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Hah, sad but true, I think I have met a few (too many!) of these 'incomplete lovers' in my life so far.

Well written as usual Miss Mozell.

Brilliant stuff.
harumpha chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
This poem made me grin wryly. I love the "he's such and such but this and that." The contradictions helps with the imagery of the character in more depth. I especially admire how you were able to rhyme and yet keep the point of the poem there. Very nice; it shows an experienced writer.

My favorite lines must have to be: "He tells you that he's single/ though he wears a wedding ring."

Great job at capturing the ideal man with his imperfections that women tend to gloss over for the sake of their "true love". -
emerald chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
*wry smile* Good job. Good characterization.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
This was sad, and it flowed really well. I loved how it wasn't really a story, but you didn't just bundle things together in a weird way. Great job.