|Reviews for Pain Unbeautiful|
| LightfootLee chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Ok first off, you dont have any punctuation, which is great, good job never start. Second, its awesome,I really like it. Some of the rhymes [man I cant even spell rhyme anymore, its been awhile] are a bit elementary, which is fine cause they still work well. So good job keep up the good work.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
I could have sworn I reviewed this already. FictionPress is driving up the wall.
Anyhow, nicely done.