Reviews for Hypothetically Being
Vera Dicere chapter 9 . 12/27/2008
i'm not sure i ever actually reviewed this story, though i know i meant to. better late than never, eh?

i'm really intrigued by jesse- his [generally] sunny personality seems kind of at odds with the amount of injuries/scars he has. i can't wait to find out more about him. and matt. poor boy. sometimes i want to smack him for being an antisocial bitch, but i understand some of his more selfish impulses when it comes to roy- jealousy's a bitch, especially when it's an unrequited love. and i'm really interested to see how things play out with jesse and matt, because they've certainly got some kind of chemistry between them.

looking forward to the next chapter! :)
magalina chapter 9 . 12/27/2008
I effing HATE the new review button...

An M rated chapter coming soon? Cant wait! I want to know whats wrong with Jesse...
Synonymous Brian chapter 9 . 12/26/2008
Nice chap, please update soon!
Ty Taco chapter 9 . 12/26/2008
I really like your story.

That being said...I hate your main character.


He is a complete and total ASSHOLE.

I really don't understand why.

I REALLY like Jesse.

You need to have more of him.

Matt needs to apologize and stop being such a bitch.

Cuz its gotten to the point where its not cool anymore.

Its just extremely annoying.




Sunshine Bear chapter 9 . 12/26/2008
You're weird.

That's not much of an insult because I'm sitting on the floor because I'm way to lazy to clean off my bed and my desk to sit on/by them.


I love this story.

You should...write more.. just cause.
layne chapter 9 . 12/26/2008
this chapter was good. as always, your plot and characters have me on edge. i am wanting to learn about this strange sort of preference thing that Roy and Jesse have going on. You know, I was thinking that it would be really interesting if Roy and that girl weren't actually dating, but that was just a cover up for Roy and Jesse dating. Though that would be depressing for Matt. Anyway, update soon please 0_0
Meanne77 chapter 8 . 12/21/2008
I like it. Not your average schoolfic, characters are interesting and intriguing. I hope you're still writing it.
Ryette chapter 8 . 11/28/2008
I love this XD

Although i have to say that I'm not really one of Jesse's fans...I don't know why. He just irks me. eheheh sorry. Maybe just because he shows up in my mind as Blayne from Project Runway this past season and I didn't really like Blayne, therefore don't really like Jesse. Ehh. I really like Matt, though, despite his jerk-ness. Puzzling. Maybe I'm twisted.

Update soon, por favor :)

Born Restless chapter 8 . 11/23/2008
I am way too emotionally involved in this story. Mattie is just so funny and relatable. The drama and comedy are incredibly well balanced. Thanks for the story. Not to harass you but please update soon.
rAiNwAtEr1 chapter 8 . 11/13/2008
Where to start with this story. I like it. Actually, I more than like it. The characters just sought of grow on you.

- I must say that at first, I was hoping that Matt was going to get with Roy. It's just something about the whole 'I am in love with my best friend' thing. But when you introduced Jessy I thought, "damn this boy is hot!"

- I was a little nervous with the introduction of Jessy and how curious Roy seemed to be with him. I thought, 'Oh no, please don't let him have a thing for him!' But of course a few chapters later I find out that he is secretly dating Tara. Which I prefer, even if it makes Matt bitter and depress, because it just makes him that much cutter.

- Jessy is just adorable. And although I like his cute side, I prefer him when his having a burst of strong will like with the lap-dance in this chapter. I have a feeling that if something is going to happen between him and Matt, he will have to be the one to make the first move.

- I love Matt's personality. I like the fact that he isn't all over Jesse. Being realistically, I can't picture his type of character dropping his crush to pursue a new target so easily. I can picture a lot of drama going on in later chapters, and being a glutton of punishment, I just can't wait.

- A few of my favorite lines from this story so far are listed below:

(1) "...Sin and cosin? I’ve heard of sin…but cosin? What, like, sin shared by two people? I would wonder what that has to do with math, but there’s a formula for it and everything..."

- I just love these lines!

(2) "...Geez, I’m sorry. I know how it feels, if that makes you feel any better. My friend Tara called me up on the phone and her first words to me were ‘Dumbledore dies.’ I wanted to murder her."

- This actually happened to me! My cousin called me up to tell me that 'Dumbledore dies'. I was so pissed off! The nerve of some people.

- But enough of my rant.

All there is left for me to say is that I hope you update your story again soon!
Kristy-Bell chapter 8 . 11/3/2008
man I love this story!

Infact I love most of you storys D

Keep writing Because you syre have a talent for it XD

StarRuby chapter 8 . 10/20/2008
ohgod that was sexy.

I love Rent, btw. :P

can't wait for the next chapter!
everblack chapter 8 . 10/12/2008
Aw man, I cannot believe you're seventeen. I'm turning seventeen and I can't write for shit. You have a gift hun. You're writing is amazing. I really hope you consider publishing something in the near future. So update soon and all that jazz. Lots of love.
Zebbie chapter 8 . 9/22/2008
Oh why is Matt such an insensitive idiot? Stupid boy. And also stupid Jesse for not being able to see that he's a scared fool, running in the wrong direction because facing up to what he wants is too hard. Do we get another update soon, because that would be great.

Take care,

mr anchovie chapter 8 . 9/21/2008
i think i'm gonna shoot the next person that mentions rent, i'm right there with matt on that one. But yeah finally its getting somewhere! climax is on :D lol keep it updated k? it takes u forever!
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