|Reviews for Hypothetically Being|
| Yaoi-sama chapter 11 . 12/26/2010
This is a very interesting and psychological story, in my view. Matt, as a sort of a misanthropist, reminds me of Holden Caulfield from The Catcher in the Rye, but the similarity with the book and the character stops there.
You have a very interesting approach to the subject, with a beautiful boy with destroyed hands, who manages somehow, who (well, to me), seems naive, but when you think better, is he? Small signs he gives Matt, in form of the tone of voice, and now this (not a small sign there :D ), and intentions he has when it comes to Roy that we don't know about. A deep veil of mystery.
And a good-natured Roy, who still has flaws, like watching porn (is that considered a flaw? It's certainly a shocking revelation to those who idealize him, like Matt does).
And Matt, frustrated by his surroundings, scrutinizing everything and everyone, criticizing them, and finally coming to hate himself. His sarcasm and occasional humor. Brilliant.
Your story has some depth to it. The only flaw that I found so far is that this story hasn't been updated in a year, and I'm dying out of curiosity. I'd like to know if you dropped the story or not. It is such a waste to leave it like this.
Sorry for the long review, anyway. I felt like expressing my opinion.
| prrina chapter 11 . 10/1/2010
Please, please, please update! ):its been, like, a year ):
| purplehost chapter 11 . 9/18/2010
"came to a resolution" that right killed me. Is it bad that my mind went right into the gutter? Regardless, it made me laugh.
| CainReborn chapter 11 . 9/18/2010
this isn't the end right? RIGHT! I don't think so... can't wait for more!
| Nevheera chapter 11 . 8/28/2010
Ugh, this is why I don't read WIPs anymore, because i have to BEG FOR MORE! I really enjoyed this, I def have a kink for disfigurements. I do hope you come back to this someday and finish it up. Not enough gay yet, and I want to know what happens!
| lalaland22 chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
I love how i can't really tell who Matt likes more, Roy or Jesse...it makes the whole story even better. The smut was great b/w Matt and Jesse but i kinda can't wait to see something happen b/w Matt and Roy. :)
Unpredictability is always great!
Please update, it's been about a YEAR
| Chowtime chapter 11 . 7/27/2010
I think you need to update soon. Just sayin' ;)
| IvanBraginski chapter 10 . 7/25/2010
XD yoweeyaoi. Oh, gosh. I can't stop laughing. That IS how you pronounce it.
| IvanBraginski chapter 3 . 7/25/2010
XD I know this is weird, but I'm really really happy you spelt Massachusetts wrong. I live in the lovely state of MA, and I always wondered if people from other states/places couldn't spell it right the first time...
In short, thank you~
You made my day~
| charm en route chapter 11 . 7/24/2010
This story is absolutely adorable, especially the characters. I love how antisocial Matt is and how he reacts to everything. Though I am very confused about Roy. At first I thought he was gay himself and going to get with Jesse, but then I thought it really was Tara he was with, but then I went back to thinking it was Jesse, and now I'm just confused. Hahahah. :)
I've noticed you haven't updated in a really long time, and I hope that changes soon. :D
| StarRuby chapter 11 . 7/5/2010
oh my god
excited for next chapter. :D
| Miraculous.Science chapter 11 . 7/1/2010
:( I was still rooting for Roy to get with Matt :( sigh. I suppose that's not gonna happen. But, I will not give up hope! Even if by the end of this Jesse is with Matt, I will make up a happy ending where Roy and Matt are together! Mark my words :P
| Random chapter 11 . 6/30/2010
OMG come back and update this please... you cant end it like that... OMG
| Anonymiss chapter 11 . 6/25/2010
I JUST realized you hadn't completed the story.
*Crawls back on hands and knees*
Please forgive my stupidity...Oh author I salute you...I'll go back and review every stinkin chapter...and review any other works of yours I read...and all your favorite stories...and I'll review the fanarts...and we'll have a review orgy, so PLEASE forgive me and update soon!
| Anonymiss chapter 11 . 6/25/2010
You. Just. Ended. It. Like. THAT!
And I know, I know, the author (you) wants me to review more. But I totally look like a stalker when I review after every chapter. Plus, I don't have many good things to say.
Lessee. I thought it was really brave of you to write about an asshole. It was really good, too, because I was expecting him to turn into Mary Sue (male version?).
Umm yeah, the scars were weird. I woulda thought Jesse was the up-front type, but if it's bad I can understand...honestly I have NO idea. And I have NO idea why Matt would hate his mom!
Now that I think about it, I'm impressed that you ended the story with so many loose ends. ;D
And I totally had NO IDEA about the energy drink. I've never seen it before in my life, so I'm on wikipedia, being all, "Why don't they mention some sort of cocaine you can drink?"
I feel like SUCH an idiot. XD XD XD Write more! For all my bitching, I enjoyed it.