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![]() ![]() ![]() So, about the UNGH-ness. I am really upset because this is the last posted chapter and I... well, want isn't exactly the word for it. Need? I need more or I will die? Yeah. That's more accurate. Not to be one of those annoying "omg post moar soon plz" people... but um... yes. So. This is really super awesomely great so far. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I was going to do the annoying bitchy thing and just wait till I'm done to review, but I had to be all like RENT OMG ILY and stuff. And also Jesse ungh. Like. In a fr srs way. I can has lap dance? Srsly. OMG. So hot. You write hotness well. I am excited to see where this whole thing goes. Just so you know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear Amindaya, this is awesome. I love Jesse! He's just th sort you just wanna hug til he turns blue. P.S. Can you please ask Matt if he'd like some epic with that fail? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The thing I like about this story - aside from it being really hot; seriously, I don't know how you do it but you have me burning every time something intimate happens - is that I can really relate to the mangled hands thing. I don't miss fingers, but I think I lost all the moist in the skin of my hands which doesn't look very nice, to be honest. I always think my hands look like either a reptile or rimple dog , haha! Or like a patch that eats away at the 'normal' skin. When seasons change, from hot to cold and vice versa, the skin of my hands tear up. It hurts sometimes, but what's mostly annoying is the stinging. (Uh. Yeah, stinging doesn't hurt. It's not like peeling skin off your palms dfkjfk) It's much (MUCH!) more better than it used to be though. It's probably a combi of eczema and my allergy for perfume, which is pretty much in all soap products. It grew pretty fast. Back when I was a kid I couldn't help but scratch my hands the entire time. Even in my sleep I did it and I woke up with raw hands quite often. When they were really raw I'd rub it in with soap and wash it ten million times or something, just to cool it off and get rid of the gross smell. Little did I know I was making it way worse by doing that! I always hid my hands with my sleeves in school. I've never been ashamed of it because I knew it's just eczema. If anyone asked what the hell was wrong with my hands, I felt I could explain it to them, but when the moment came I mostly told them rubbish about having burned myself with hot water and such. But that was back when I was a kid, so it wasn't that much of a big deal back then. Sometimes I felt I had a stigma though. Some people didn't want to touch my hands, even this docter I once went to. When I entered high school it ..er, pretty much started to 'eat' away at my fingers as well. For a long time, I think a year, I couldn't use my hands properly. It was so raw and open - I'll never forget it - I couldn't bend my fingers anymore without feeling as if razors were cutting my skin. I remember trying so hard to hide it back then. People may not comment on it, but you see them looking, you know? Staring at it. Which was really annoying because it made me feel very self-concious. I'd much rather have people saying it looked like rotten meat 'stead of them looking and waiting for it to bite and 'infect'them or something. But it's all alright now. Found out the cause, did something about it and my hands are okay now aside from the lack of supplety...suppleness... - Ok , I don't know how to say that, haha. I'm mostly happy about being able to use them to the fullest again: drawing, opening bottle caps, THROWING PUNCHES, turning freaking doorknobs, carrying heavy things and so on. Eczema doesn't compare to missing fingers, I know that, but I do feel a certain ... warmth, connection, idk, with it. Especially with that part where he's all "disabled what? I can do everything, from using chopsticks to jacking off!". I hope you'll update soon! Much love~ ps Matt is such a perv in this chap lol. Enjoyed it A LOT, obviously~ OH, and I laughed my ass off at the beginning of this chapter too! "Roy has a blue room. His fav colour is green" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. Matts such an asshole. And omg Jesse. Haahah. It makes me sad you haven't updated in a while... (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter a lot. I feel like we're getting to know a very mysterious side of Jesse. i like the sexy version of his personality, very alluring- and I know Mattie thinks so. Your writing is well put together and I haven't seen one spelling mistake. you have a wonderful story and I'm looking forward to reading more. Hmm, I thought she was talking about Roy liking Mattie, but I guess it could be them together. Wouldn't that suck for Mattie at first? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! *nosebleeds* Damn you! This is so good! Love it! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so liking the new kid! But he has a lot of scars on him. Ouch. Loving the story so far. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i so love this chapter! i hope jesse gets one over on him in the next chapter the so like each other! i say get in his pants lol |
![]() ![]() OMG amazing. I love this story utterly for its characters. And this chappy was sizzling. I can't wait for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plz update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could write a long and intelligent review... but all I can think right now is that this story (chapter) was HOT. Damn. You've had a long time to think about a proper follow up. Really! (Too bad you can't see my puppy eyes right now) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This bit was awesome and hilarious. I was just digging through my story alerts I've had piling up since summer and I saw that you had posted this chapter and was quite glad, I really love this story. I laughed quite a bit. I hope to see another post from you soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) I'm really liking your story so far. Jesse is cute and all but he confuses me. I can't really understand him. Well I hope that the chapters coming up will help me get him. |