Reviews for Dark Twilight
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Yesterday is 3 s. So you missed up, but I really liked it.
amara chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
The last line has 6 syllables. Poem's still good though.
keltica chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
A theme I really cherish, the magic of twilight, you convey a fleeting though dreamlike imagery ...

keltica, the celtic fire from within
Ginny Anderson chapter 1 . 7/13/2001
very good
Kayla chapter 1 . 4/14/2001
I like it
Whale of the World chapter 1 . 3/22/2001
really neat, i mean, for a haiku. After all, there are only 3 lines to say what you want.