Reviews for I Swear I'm Gonna Finish This One!
Carmel March chapter 4 . 4/28/2007
This is a truly wonderful story. Your descriptions are fantastic, and let the reader see into the world you've created. I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline is creative, keeps the reader interested throughout the entire read. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more.

carm