|Reviews for norway|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
I like this.. its cute and well done... I love the whole winter summer thing and that last line was awesome
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
"you northern boy" - i like that
and i really like you you used snow and ice and the cold and temperature...that's really something clever...
you did a really fine job...
p.s.: somehow, this reminds me of my piece "Snowflakes and Thermodynamics"; kindly check it our if you have the time...
| she smolders chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
The imagery in this is just gorgeous. Great job.
| Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
I like this poem a great deal. I used to love winter, & now I don't, so I appreciate this.
"your face will
be a shadowed basement window until
next November." Great lines. :)