Reviews for Try Not to Choke
EAV chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
Wow...this poem makes me wonder what you think about. Reading this makes me feel like I've seen a part of the world through different eyes. I hope you don't choke...who else will eat twice-baked potatoes with me-
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
This was good I loved it. and for the double spacing... all you need to do is hit Shift and Enter...

SerialXLain chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
This has to be the best poem you've written. It flows so perfectly...and it makes my chest hurt. I love it. The first verse is probably my favorite, but...all of it's pretty...


:favorites it:
magalina chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
Nice, I liked it.