Reviews for goodbye
InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
Deep...

It was alluringly written, and I love the feeling and format of the poem.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
I like the repition of goodbye.. and the line about old feelings never dying because its so true... very bittersweet piece.. i like it a lot
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
goodbyes aren't appreciated much.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
Beautifully written. I like.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
Beautiful. This reminds me of one of those extended movie scenes in which two characters must part . . . "goodbye" is definitely one of the hardest last words we all face at some point. I don't know if you have read "History of Love" by Nicole Krauss but there are many of these moments in that book as well. A wonderful book. Well, great write ... especially the first stanza. The loose rythem really gives this the right, almost tumbling feel. Keep writing, k.
Hermione-Hermyown chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
That was so sweet... I loved it. You have a talent for this. Great job! This is going on my favorites *Wipes away a tear from eye* It was sad, but it's the truth about so many relationships. Great work, and keep writing.
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
reminds me of graduation. i guess lots of resolved feelings happen when a chapter ends. nice work.