|Reviews for Stage tears aren't fake at all|
| LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
This is a great idea...
I can imagine is being true for people too :(
| Unready chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
I don't quite get the meaning of this, its sort of ambiguous.
| Vancelle chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
It seems like it's simply prose with random line breaks. As a poem, it's not that good. As prose, it has merit. Edit it a bit, take out unnecessary words, and as a poem it would be rather good too.
| JesykaStoryTeller chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
Wow, thats good. I liked it.
| effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
I liked it, you portrayed your feelings well.
It's in need of some review punctuation-wise, which would then clear up some of the choppiness.
Also, you could condense some of the lines into shorter, more witty, phrases.
Overall, good job. I love the premise.