|Reviews for monarch girl|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
This is so beautiful and could have several different meanings, which I love!
I love "winged like fairy dust fantasies" but the whole poem was just spectacular.
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Very, very nice. It's so sweet and young. 'dairy dust fantasies' Lovely, lovely, lovely.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
Gentle and floating and visual. I like the otherworldliness of this. Surreal, but relatable. Well done.
| water lily nymph chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
what a beautiful poem. it could be about so many things - growing up, blooming late..."winged like fairy dust fantasies." just gorgeous.
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
completely paints a picture in my mind; love the last three lines
the voice seems childish but mature at the same time