Reviews for Mercy's War |
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Menginpeh chapter 8 . 4/28/2008 Think you meant "...and that was (worse)than anger..." Good chapter. Only thing I would have done different would be to have James apologize to Sam. Thanks again. |
Menginpeh chapter 7 . 4/28/2008 Definitely one of the neat things about being close to your siblings is being able to "read" one another without saying a word. Can't count how many times my sisters and I have been able to carry on conversations without saying a word. Thanks for another great chapter. |
Menginpeh chapter 6 . 4/28/2008 I thought maybe you had him going to Philadelphia for a purpose! :) Can't believe he signed up without Sam. Good chapter. Don't know how I could have missed you the time I've been on here. Glad I found you - really enjoying this. |
Menginpeh chapter 5 . 4/28/2008 Loved this one too. Won't go into much detail or I'll never catch up, but it was very good. |
Menginpeh chapter 4 . 4/25/2008 Aw. Making his sister a gift. That's sweet. Glad she didn't see it. That would have totally ruined it. I'm a little confused about something - You say Mrs. Brown's daughter is Jane, but then Anne says she knows Ruth. Who's Ruth? Her sister? If she's the same age as Anne, it can't be Mrs. Brown's name - so who is it? That didn't see really clear to me. Don't know, maybe I'm just being dense. Ooh, fighting for his sister. Really liked that. Always wanted a brother growing up and that is how I always dreamed he would be. Really enjoyed this chapter. |
Menginpeh chapter 3 . 4/24/2008 Can't ask for much more than a great friend. Ha!Ha! My dad thinks apple cider vinegar cures everything! :) Again really loved the interaction between your characters. Wow, that's a lot of responsibility on James. He seems to be the kind of young man to do whatever he can to do what he needs to do. Sounds like a fine fellow. Anne is sweet, but not fluff - like that. And for some reason I have the feeling that Aunt Lesley is quite a character! Enjoyed it. Thanks. |
Menginpeh chapter 2 . 4/24/2008 Liked the descriptiveness of the morning however you used the phrase "she stretched her warm rays" and "the sun stretch her rays" in the same paragraph. Might want to use a little more variety. Started out just a bit confused by the second paragraph until I realized we had gone back in time. Guess I should have checked the chapter title. My fault, not yours. I loved the interaction between James and Anne. Enjoyed meeting all your new characters. You also gave a lot of information about them without it seeming like a report. Good job. |
Menginpeh chapter 1 . 4/24/2008 Great introductory your descriptive language. I felt so sorry for James. I could really imagine his pain. Nice to know that someone realized the English government had to hire Hessian mercenaries to fight the colonists because so many of the British were reluctant to fight their former countrymen. Of course, thats not to say there weren't Englishmen eager to fight. Of course you already know all this, so I don't know why I'm telling you. Guess I'm just agreeing with a fellow history buff. I'm assuming Josiah is probably someone James grew up with or at least knew before the war. Guess I'll keep reading to find out. Great job. |
lightforlife13 chapter 2 . 1/30/2008 Hi, it's light, and i got your message, it's just i can't send u a message yet, i have to wait three days. but thanks so much for repling! i miss talking to you. :)Luv ya, In Him ~lightforlife13 |
lightforlife13 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008 Hi, this is light, used to be songs-forg-life13, but i was forced to create a new account because i forgot my password to my emial. so i read ur story, and loved it. happy reading~ lightforlife13 |
soojinyeh chapter 1 . 9/12/2007 Revenge is sweet. Love the story. Read and review mine please? |
Elizabeth More chapter 15 . 9/8/2007 Wow! I hope James isn't really hiding something. Poor guy, I can totally sympathize with feeling run to death. And Lord Philips? Arrested? You leave us on a terrible cliff! |
Elizabeth More chapter 14 . 8/22/2007 As I have said before, I love the way you do Rachel and her family. I don’t know why you don’t think you’re good at writing from a girl’s POV; you do both Anne and Rachel splendidly. Especially Anne, seeing that she’s almost your opposite! *laughs at Thomas* What a darling! I would have loved to see how that game turned out. *grins* O! Something tells me we’re getting close to the real action now! *fidgets* I can’t wait, I can’t wait! Sorry it took me so long to catch up. I forgot my password and couldn’t log in, and it took forever for it to register in my brain that there was a password recovery. Haha! But now I’m kind of sad that I’m all caught up because I have to wait! God bless, Galadriel |
Elizabeth More chapter 13 . 8/22/2007 Ah, good for Anne! Hurrah! That Gabriel is a nasty one, dear me! The things he said were horrible! I hope Anne doesn’t remember them when…you know…that would be so awful for her, poor dear. God bless, Galadriel |