Reviews for Not so Happily Ever After |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I finished and loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHHHHH! I LOVE THIS. THEY ALMOST KISSED |
![]() ![]() ![]() noooo grandma ToT I'm loving the story so far |
![]() ![]() Soooo sacrificing 'free will' was a bit excessive. My dude, what makes you human is your mortality, features, senses, and so much more. She could have easily said hair color, eye color, life expectancy. Even the sense of touch on something she doesn't use. If the rules pertaining to this 'equivalent exchange' was something that made you up as an individual I could understand her accepting the fate of forcefully wearing her old piece of gauntlet, but the way this was described was way too broad. She could have also easily said that she would forgo wearing any armor on her hand. That would mean giving up the armor instead of embracing her other identity. Her other identity is technically still part of her human side, just a facade. The other human she poses as. Idk I might be wrong. |
![]() ![]() I wonder if all trees are this sassy |
![]() ![]() Hi, love the ending. It was as gripping, exciting and humourous as the previous chapters. The book is overall an excellent read, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOved it! 100/10 bananas!... idk...but i loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was really good. Although it was not part of the reported genres(humor and romance) at one point admit I was afraid that this story would have ended in tragedy XD Thanks! :) ah, I think I'll read soon also its prequel, if I may call it so...: I'm curious to know how Jasmine and Eadel known each other and their past _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Talking trees, talking dragon, what else do you have up in your sleeve? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i miss the tree, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I totally lvoed this story! To be honest, I've read it how many times? Five? Maybe even six. It's nice, funny, simply very good :) |
![]() ![]() I just love your story. Its fun to read it. Thanx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wondered what happened to Eadel... there was no way that she couldn't be included, but she made me laugh so it makes up for when she wasn't in the story. I was thinking that you could possibly write a story of Isabelle and her lady. |
![]() ![]() Great story...loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD I'm not sure if the king was cutting you off or if you were ignoring each other entirely. |