|Reviews for Not so Happily Ever After|
| Micah7 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
A girl knight? I bet she's highly attractive.
Also, i found that bit between her grandmother and her in the kitchen to be cute in a way. And crytic old ppl usually freak me out, though I'm a fan of Merlin, the wizard. lol
Will her appearance be described a bit more in the following chapters? I hope so.
| Imagination12 chapter 18 . 8/30/2011
Oh, did you take the name Adriana from A Comedy of Errors? I'm doing that play for school and I'm her character in some of the scenes.
I love your story, you really did well with it!
| elfspirit7 chapter 28 . 6/20/2011
AWESOME! Thanks for the read, can't wait to read your future stories XD!
| Layla the fiend chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
oh god you broke the fourth wall
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/1/2011
oh yeaah. i like what i am reading. thanks .
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/1/2011
you are an amasing writer dude.
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/1/2011
this is getting interesting and i cant wait to see what will happen next, great chapter
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/31/2011
BEST CHAPTER EVER! dude, i was waiting so long for finally they can get together. good work
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/31/2011
please tell me that this magician will help the princess and "black knight" get together. also i like the story better without all of the comedy. it is a great story.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/31/2011
BEAUTIFUL STORY and very entertaining i must say. i cant wait to see what would happen when the princess see the flowers. will she be happy or mad. even better, i want to see what she does when she learns that the knight is a she and not a he. hahahha
love the stroy so far, you are a good writer
| The Crazy Cat Lady chapter 28 . 12/30/2010
Great piece of work :)
| The Crazy Cat Lady chapter 27 . 12/30/2010
Rofl! So that was Zorana's "excellent news."
| The Crazy Cat Lady chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
"But, surprise! The Black Knight is indeed a girl."
LOL! Love the line.
| sirozorg chapter 28 . 12/14/2010
I liked so much this story!
| SweetFangs chapter 25 . 12/7/2010
idk if u wanna fix this typo but at this part "Faranea drew a hand back and smacked the back of my skull with it." i thnk "Faranea" is supposed to be "Jasmine".
yay this is a happy chapter! haha i laughed at the scene where Zorana yelled "watch it, you two!". (my mom was staring at me .)