Reviews for Not so Happily Ever After
Micah7 chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
hey i like that tree! there were quite a few moments I noticed while reading that was funny. And just to be 'safe' lets say the king already sent an army and not a single soul came back. )
now that's settled...i wish the tree could come along. Plus the boy's name reminds me of Shakespeare. lol all in good humor, I assure you.
Anyway, i like what I've read so far of the story.
Micah7 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
A girl knight? I bet she's highly attractive.
Also, i found that bit between her grandmother and her in the kitchen to be cute in a way. And crytic old ppl usually freak me out, though I'm a fan of Merlin, the wizard. lol
Will her appearance be described a bit more in the following chapters? I hope so.
Imagination12 chapter 18 . 8/30/2011
Oh, did you take the name Adriana from A Comedy of Errors? I'm doing that play for school and I'm her character in some of the scenes.

I love your story, you really did well with it!

Imagination12
elfspirit7 chapter 28 . 6/20/2011
AWESOME! Thanks for the read, can't wait to read your future stories XD!
Layla the fiend chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
oh god you broke the fourth wall
Guest chapter 21 . 2/1/2011
oh yeaah. i like what i am reading. thanks .
Guest chapter 20 . 2/1/2011
you are an amasing writer dude.
Guest chapter 17 . 2/1/2011
this is getting interesting and i cant wait to see what will happen next, great chapter
Guest chapter 13 . 1/31/2011
BEST CHAPTER EVER! dude, i was waiting so long for finally they can get together. good work
Guest chapter 11 . 1/31/2011
please tell me that this magician will help the princess and "black knight" get together. also i like the story better without all of the comedy. it is a great story.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/31/2011
BEAUTIFUL STORY and very entertaining i must say. i cant wait to see what would happen when the princess see the flowers. will she be happy or mad. even better, i want to see what she does when she learns that the knight is a she and not a he. hahahha

love the stroy so far, you are a good writer
The Crazy Cat Lady chapter 28 . 12/30/2010
Great piece of work :)
The Crazy Cat Lady chapter 27 . 12/30/2010
Rofl! So that was Zorana's "excellent news."
The Crazy Cat Lady chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
"But, surprise! The Black Knight is indeed a girl."

LOL! Love the line.
sirozorg chapter 28 . 12/14/2010
I liked so much this story!
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