Reviews for Little Bird
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Sad, but so like life.
believe-in-futures chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
You change tenses though which is strange "you say will fly away" and then "it flew into a window" implying that it hasn't flown yet but it has already hit the window.

I like the metaphor. I like the use of the phrase "pretend to soar" in particular. It's sad but sort of beautiful at the same time.
TragicDreams chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Wow! I'm kind of at a loss for words! Shocking! But I can see what you mean. I take it as someone that dies prematurly. Keep writing!