Reviews for Perfect Point
fictitious facades chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Wow. That's really good. Seriously, I love this. It goes from rambling(what I ususally do) to a stacato-ed end. The increasingly short lines add alot, not just in order to fit with the message.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
I could really feel the numb emotion here. Wishing for something more real than what you have become. I relate a lot. Great job.
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
I can relate. I alos like you made the poem into a point. Thats talented.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Wow, very cool, I love the way the words come together on the page. Very innovative. And of course the poem is great too!