Reviews for Scream
Sambot chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I liked the poem overall. I think you should move the apostrophe before the C of 'cause. I also think you should only capitalize the first S. The look of a poem like this is also important. Also, should it be "everything will change ONCE you see?"
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
I can sense emotions of second thought. You want to remove your mask, let them see you for who you truly are. Yet in the same breath you wish to be safe. Too bad life is never really safe. Great job.
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
I like how you spell the word scream on the side. Thats cool. Anyway, good poem. I like the emotion
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
An acrostic! Excellent work.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
I really like this. It's an interesting point of view and an interesting way of conveying that thought. I love how you made an acrostic flow. It's a really great poem.