Reviews for Mistress & Deciever
joe chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
yeah durka durka, hey yo sean is over and yeah... im likin this poem, it says a lot... yeha "better off as friends we are"- yoda impersonator
randompoetry chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
The beginning was really good, the ending kind of faded a bit, but was still good. But to me it seemed the beginning was more "the mistress" and the ending more "the deciever". But I dunno, it was nice!