Reviews for I'm In Love With A Stripper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() o. This is even better than before! PLZ update soon!-Salem |
![]() ![]() Looks like someone's a little late on the updates XD Well I'm happy you updated I like yoru writing as always and of course Pat is an ass. Im happy that nothing happened with Lily and Pat ] Oliver is such a cutie XD i love that part where you said he covered his eyes and aww its so cute Keep it up Update soon please |
![]() ![]() I like it! I don't like Pat, though. xP I can't wait for Jean's reaction when he finds out (because he totally will, right? 8D). xD Update soon, please! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() evil pat! :O she should call jean, he would probably kill pat though. not that that would be a huge shame... |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES SHES GOING TO QUITE THE JOB! agh Patrick is annoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() crap - thats horrible! NOT the chapter, what pat did , the chapter is great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God damn Pat, how dare he, he broke her damn wrist for god sake, what the hell. Poor Lily. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I don't like Patrick. Please PLEASE let Jean do something about him. Update! ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Grr... Patrick makes me so mad sometimes! I would love to hear more of his backstory though. I believe in a previous chapter you hinted at the fact that he might be involved in something illegal. Is this going to come into play again? I love the Jean/Lilly cuteness. Lilly is good for Jean. She helps bring up his self-esteem. I hope she can help him with his brother problems. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. :) I loved this chapter. ...yeah, I don't have much else to say. :P Update soon, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() no. He was so getting good at his self-confidence thing and now its all gonna get jacked up all over again. Well crap. Anywayz, fantasticalicousazing story. As always. Plz update soon. -Salem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like hell Patrick did anything to make Lily like Jean. Jean is just too sweet not to like. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. Love the plotline, the characters, and you seem to have good grammer. Good job, I don't have any constructive criticism for you at the moment. Or at least I didn't catch anything. It would be so wonderful if you continued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really nice story~ Hope you update soon~ Narq. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Lilly... Narq. |