Reviews for I'm In Love With A Stripper
FireInsideMyself chapter 20 . 12/8/2008
o. This is even better than before! PLZ update soon!-Salem
Liily chapter 20 . 12/7/2008
Looks like someone's a little late on the updates XD

Well I'm happy you updated I like yoru writing as always and of course Pat is an ass.

Im happy that nothing happened with Lily and Pat ]

Oliver is such a cutie XD i love that part where you said he covered his eyes and aww its so cute

Keep it up

Update soon please
di chapter 20 . 12/7/2008
I like it! I don't like Pat, though. xP I can't wait for Jean's reaction when he finds out (because he totally will, right? 8D). xD Update soon, please! (:
xemeraldeyesx chapter 20 . 12/7/2008
evil pat! :O

she should call jean, he would probably kill pat though. not that that would be a huge shame...
storys chapter 20 . 12/7/2008

agh Patrick is annoying.
Kyrina chapter 20 . 12/7/2008
crap - thats horrible! NOT the chapter, what pat did , the chapter is great.
Jevanminx chapter 20 . 12/7/2008
God damn Pat, how dare he, he broke her damn wrist for god sake, what the hell. Poor Lily.

storys chapter 19 . 11/24/2008
...I don't like Patrick. Please PLEASE let Jean do something about him. Update! ;D
Michelle Richard chapter 19 . 11/24/2008
Grr... Patrick makes me so mad sometimes! I would love to hear more of his backstory though. I believe in a previous chapter you hinted at the fact that he might be involved in something illegal. Is this going to come into play again? I love the Jean/Lilly cuteness. Lilly is good for Jean. She helps bring up his self-esteem. I hope she can help him with his brother problems. Can't wait for the next chapter!
dyingimmortal chapter 19 . 11/24/2008
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. :) I loved this chapter. ...yeah, I don't have much else to say. :P Update soon, please!
FireInsideMyself chapter 19 . 11/23/2008
no. He was so getting good at his self-confidence thing and now its all gonna get jacked up all over again. Well crap. Anywayz, fantasticalicousazing story. As always. Plz update soon. -Salem
Jevanminx chapter 19 . 11/23/2008
Like hell Patrick did anything to make Lily like Jean. Jean is just too sweet not to like.

rainbowpuddle chapter 19 . 11/23/2008
Interesting story.

Love the plotline, the characters, and you seem to have good grammer.

Good job, I don't have any constructive criticism for you at the moment. Or at least I didn't catch anything.

It would be so wonderful if you continued.
Narq chapter 19 . 11/22/2008
This is a really nice story~

Hope you update soon~

Narq chapter 15 . 11/22/2008
Poor Lilly...

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