Great story! Really enjoyed the drama, humour and romance!

Awww I love this story. .Jee but Tyler how can u kish Rachel that hurt you know. .atleast use brain love sick boy. . .ok ok anyways happy to see you together with Alliee. .dont repeat the mistake again. .I like Lucas he so cute. .

'kay...quite rushed. no offence, but perhaps it would've been better to leave this story unfinished because this ending is very...

sorry. honesty is the best policy.

~daenerys~

Nice start. The ending sucked so bad though. A good advice writer to writer, finish your stories first and then post a chapter or do multiple chapters in your laptop first before posting if youre the type who loses interest fast. Its a waste if you just ruin the ending of youre stories when you dont feel like doing it anym6re. I think it couldve had something more with the part of her catching him kiss another girl. It had a good overall plot though it was just the endhng thats bad.

Finally! The brother becomes a brother (though it was because he already really needed to, obviously, but still) I am :))))))))))). Am hating on Shelly. I really hate it when the bad guys have the last word. And it didn't help that the line she said pissed me off too. I would've scraped her brain out, such a bitch

Is it just me or is everyone around her (brother, friends, etc) all emotionally incapacitated and insensitive people? Lol! I mean no matter how casual you are with your siblings and close friends you would think they'd give you a bit of time, space, a molecule of sympathy, or at least be a bit pissed off for you and not treat the 'My boyfriend cheated on me with my best friend' situation like 'oh you changed your underwear?' I mean as if it happens everyday. I mean geez it's like its normal for her boyfriends to cheat on her and with her best friend no less, no biggie lol! But meh that might just be me, afterall i have really supportive family and friends. Prolly why i see this weird. If my friend found out she prolly wont do anything about it but she'd prolly cuss the douche to hell and back.

OMG! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEE! LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT.

AAAWWWW!1 HOW SWEET!

It seems that Allie has major anger issues and really needs to take temper control classes . But anyhow the story so far is great with little bit of overreaction.

What a great story! A little bit to short though. I wouldn't have mind to read a longer version. lol. Thanks for the fun. I hope to read more from you!

Pretty good! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

wow, just read the first paragraph of thise story. i'm gonna finish it just because i know a guy named kieran jones LOL. i crushed on him hard in third grade.

ahh cuteness! kudos love.

love it but i hate the ending. seems to rushed.

but overall i love it (:

Aw, cute. Short, but sweet! I liked it.