| Reviews for Fat Filled Popcorn |
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   nefairy chapter 9 . 5/8/2007 good chapter! : ) |
| pleasebequiet chapter 9 . 5/8/2007 damn, go ali!update soon! |
| emotionless-stares chapter 9 . 5/8/2007 lol they got in a fight! lol update soon! |
| Ski Bird chapter 9 . 5/8/2007 this was so funny! good for her. so y was kieran like taht? to make tyler jealous? update! hurry! can't wait |
| JemKay chapter 9 . 5/8/2007 Real cool! |
| Allison Smith chapter 9 . 5/8/2007 haha. por Shelly... she'll never be as good as Ally is, which is why she's such a vindictive BITCH. |
| MythCreatorWriter chapter 9 . 5/8/2007 I see you are going with that route of Kieran liking Allie, though I would have done it later. Good update. Allie and Tyler are cute together. Wow, Shelly's a bitch! Calling her best friend a slut! I'm glad she got a pop to the head! It's ok if it doesn't end where it's suppose to. : ) Update soon! |
| postcards from italy chapter 8 . 5/3/2007 puh-leese update soon.. this is awesome! |
| ANGEL992210 chapter 1 . 5/2/2007 amazing story. |
| punkrock13 chapter 8 . 4/30/2007 they are so cute! |
| MythCreatorWriter chapter 8 . 4/29/2007 It wasn't shitty, it was just the "calm before the storm". I have a chapter like that right now for my fan fic (check profile to find out more) He he.. Well, enough of my shameless adversiment. Tyler and Allie are cute together, and I like that Amy and Irma (?) suggested that she wasn't really acting like she likes him. As for your block... Something should definatly happen on the date. As to what, here are some suggestions: 1) Kieran realizes he liked Allie all along, but won't say so in til later, cause it's still too easily in the story for that. 2) The date could be a complete success and Allie and Tyler end up kissing or something. 3) The date could be a complete disaster, and Shelly could find out that it's not real. And now she has something over Allie, maybe she could ask her to do things for her. No, wait, that should be later. Final suggestion: Kieran realizes he has feelings for Allie and gets jealous when she's with Tyler, but doesn't make it really obvious. The date goes great and something happens to Allie and Tyler that make then suspicioius about one another, in a romantic way. Eventually, Shelly finds out that it's fake and has something over Allie's head. I hope those at least gave you an idea.. KEEP WRITING! DON'T GIVE UP! I've seen so many stories (including my own) go on and on, and then they just stop dead and never start going. Don't do that! |
| pinkfluffyoranges chapter 8 . 4/28/2007 hehe their soo cute. have no idea where the story should go but if she gets back with kieran or even thinks about it i will kill both you nad her with a spork! |
| Stahlut chapter 8 . 4/28/2007 oh ooh I like this story and cannot wait to read more. Yeah they are cute I mean for two people who arent really going out, anyway I like where it is heading so yeah keep it coming. |
| into the black chapter 8 . 4/28/2007 I cannot wait to see how Shelley will act when she sees Allie and Tyler together. Thanks for making us wait!(sarcasm) Please update soon, I love this! |
| TwinkleHeart chapter 8 . 4/28/2007 AW OMG THIS IS MY NEW FAVOURITE STORY! WAHHZOR OMG TYLER ISH SHO SWET OMG |