Reviews for Fat Filled Popcorn
nefairy chapter 7 . 4/21/2007
Yup, I def. don't like Shelly. But good chapter! : )
nefairy chapter 6 . 4/21/2007
good chapter! : )
nefairy chapter 5 . 4/21/2007
haha dumping pop corn all over him! : )
nefairy chapter 4 . 4/21/2007
I don't like shelly's character at all, but I guess that's because she's a biotch. Well good chapter
nefairy chapter 2 . 4/21/2007
good chapter! : )
nefairy chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
good start!
keepyourpantson chapter 7 . 4/21/2007
I love this stroy :) Keep up the good work!
RunBabyRun chapter 7 . 4/21/2007
Me like.
pHoToFrEaK chapter 7 . 4/21/2007
good post looking forward to reading about the "DOuble date"
KSDM1985 chapter 7 . 4/21/2007
Hey great chapter, yeah it was me with the double date thing glad you decided to use it. Should be an interesting next chapter.
iLoveFiction chapter 6 . 4/20/2007
o i liked this chapter i don't think it was "shitty" at all! :)

an idea: maybe you can have a school dance and tyler can't make it so she goes with lucas as a friend and tyler gets jelous

well keep up the GREAT work can't wait 'till to see what happens in the next chapter!
Allison Smith chapter 6 . 4/19/2007
they're adorable.
JemKay chapter 6 . 4/17/2007
wow! kool story. waiting for update!
MythCreatorWriter chapter 6 . 4/17/2007
Tyler's explanation was funny and cute. And it wasn't a shitty update. I just hope that Allie doesn't fall for Lucas, 'cause I like Tyler. By the way, the thing with Tyler was a little forced and random. I would love to be your editor, or whatever you call it. I'll message you soon and enclose some details.

Keep up the good work! Keep improving! (And don't give this story up!)
pHoToFrEaK chapter 6 . 4/17/2007
great post! i'll be waiting for more
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