Hmm...I'm thinking to myself whether I want Allory to be with this Lucas dude or with Tyler. Need Lucas in the next chapter for me to decide! Love it like I love music!

That was awesome! "Pretending my ass" I love that line. I think that is going to be my new line! Her brother seems really comfortable with her dating. BROTHERS ARE OVERPROTECTIVE! trust me I haven't even started dating yet and mine have a notebook full of things to do...tourter...my boyfriend with! And this Lucus figure! OH. I am likeing him. DId she get smaked in the head? Run into him? Run into his locker? What happened? UPDATE SOON!

AHA Love it

Amazing, babe!

AH And I have my story set up.

Review?

YAY! a new chapter lol. I hope to know more about Lucas!

im confused too. is it going to be lucas or tyler? omg!update soon!

This chapter wasn't that bad, I did love the part with Tyler and Ally in lunch. I knew that was coming soo enough.

ah! haha! i liked that chapter very much.

but not lucas.

he is interfering with my life.

aww damn cliffie *mock pouts* can't wait to see what happens next!

~Fallon

i'm guessing that it will turn into something more?

hey really liking this story so far, and thanx for writing about how to update i was going crazy. Really liking ally shes a really cool, crazy character. Keep up the great work.

they kissed! :)

hahaha

i'm lovin' it.

update soon. :)

You are doing better. Go with instincts when you can't think...ask your friends they will have great ideas...or use inside jokes...inside jokes are amazing. Use MORE discription. DISCRIPTION IS YOUR FRIEND! Keep up the good work! Happy Writing! :]

I think they should pretend to go out and pretend to be in love, but, of course, it eventually turns into real love. And when Allie starts to realize this, she avoids Tyler, thinking he could hurt her again. And...give something for Tyler to over come too, like an old girlfriend that shows up and still wants to go with him, but he's not sure. Something like that.

Great update as always. I could tell you were giving it more of a shot to describe more. Good try, and keep on trying. This story is cute, light, and realistic enough so it won't be drama. Keep up the good work, and I'm sorry it took this long to get this review to you.

hey!

nice story out here...im sorry i cant reply to your questions..im on summer break and im not in town so my reviews will be short and will be tended to later

ciao!

(i will review soon-properly, okay?)

great story! i think you should have them not dating for real and have some other guy like Allie which will causes Tyler to get jealous and etc...i really don't care wat u do b/c i'm pretty sure i'll like it anyways :D well, update soon!