((grabs at story)) i want more! more, more, more, please!

i really like this.

it's really good.

funny, too.

great story.

i love finding great stories on fictionpress.

i dont very often, but when i do, it's great.

AHA I'm in LOVE with this story.

I like how you're a really good writer

But you don't completely engulf the whole story in descriptive words so no one can figure out what your even describing in the first place.

Haha I I went to your piczo site for your Fiction Press stories.

Justin's sexy

And Tyler.

TylerxAllie forever, babe.

You should also put pictures of Kieran, Amy, and Imogene. I already have an idea of who Imogene should be...

I'll post it on your little chat box on your Piczo site.

So check it!

I don't have any stories right now.

But I JUST finished the first chapter of a story I'm currently working on.

Actually, I finished the first chapter awhile ago.

I just dunno what to name it.

Lol.

KEEP ON WRITING.

Hmm...well they can't just go out just like that for no reason..There has to be a major reason maybe if she wants to use Tyler to make Kieran jealous but I don't know why she would do that since he cheated on her...I know, maybe she got a crush on a new kid or someone and they talk every now and then and that's when she realizes she likes him so she asks Tyler to pretend they were going out to make him jealous since they're friends...but that may take too much work..but if you do consider it um..Tyler hasn't realized his feelings for her yet but he starts to while they pretend to go out...Another one is that um..she starts to like Tyler but she doesn't want to get hurt again as I said on my last review..so she starts to avoid him and then..she makes friends with this guy from her class or something and they flirt and then they go out because she knows the guy is a good guy..maybe a nerd? A nice guy but she can't stop her feelings for Tyler because he keeps going over her house and she always has the urge to kiss him..and so she breaks up with this guy...but avoid Tyler now because he started going out with a popular girl...Tyler's feelings still seems unknown until she kissed him while he was still with another girl..but she gets embarrassed and said it meant nothing when it did to her and that's when Tyler started to realize who he liked...hehe sorry..This is pretty long...anyway, Update soon!

Um yeah, update soon! :) I love this Tyler is such a card, I love it!

first off i want to tell you i really enjoyed reading this story. It's cute, funny, and kinda realistic.

you said you wanted to know weither they are dating for real or not. I think they should just be pretending, cause that could cause all sorts of drama, then maybe in the long run they end up together or what ever. hoped that helped you some

O_o. THEIR GOING OUT!YES!UPDATE SOON!

i love your story!

Totally Cute, loved it. Maybe you should have them pretend to go out to get back at shelly and then fall for each other or something. Just an idea. Anyways, loved it!

~BookWorm202~

this is so good! well it doesn't seem like they hate each other and with the way they act i think the pretending to date would work better than them making eachother jealous! so go with the pretending to date! are you going to bring the people tyler was at the movies with into this?

To answer your questions (and I have to admit I'm happy that you asked them), yes, I think Allie got over Shelly's betrayal too quickly. I think Allie should have avoided her like the plauge and confronted her later once she's really gotten over it. I disagree with one of the reviewers to the fact that Allie's knew that Kieran would probably leave her, but she didn't expect it from her best friend. That could take some time to get over.

I definitely think Tyler and Allie's should date, but be friends first. They would be cute together, and Tyler just has to convince Allie to date him. But to make it more interesting, you should have Tyler have something to get over once Allie and him are already dating.

That's my advice, free of charge. Take it and use it as you will. But I have just one more thing to say: I think Allie should be more describtive with everything that's going on, 'cause I didn't really feel for Allie. Not as much as I could anyway.

Please update soon! : )

Tyler's pretty sure of himself, I think he knows that he has a thing for Allie already.. he just has to convince her to date him. .

I don't really think that she got over it too quickly... though I might have handled the shelly situation differently. As in I would have just had Allie give her the Cut Direct. don't look at her, don't speak to her, if you must speak to the little twat muffin, you speak in condescending, bored tones. haha. sorry, society brat speaking. hum

I would like to read more description with a little bit of dialogue though, because that's just more interesting.

good work though!

Peronally, That was a good chapter. To answering your questions... Allie "seems" like she got over that situaltion quickly but we all know she still hasn't gotten over it. A best friend you can get over quickly but a boyfriend (it doesn't matter how long you dated) it takes a while. I actually find it quite intersting and fun to read when there are other people involved. Envy so fun to write. Keep up the good writing and Update soon!

yay! At least this chapter is longer than all of them. Anyway..well..I guess...Allie shouldn't forget about Shelly completely..maybe some flashbacks every now and then and Tyler would be the one to get her mind off of her..um..How I think Tyler and Allie should get together..is um..well..how about Tyler and Allie become friends and Allie grows to love him but then...Tyler..uh..loved another girl back home and doesn't really know how to get over her..and Allie tries to make him love her and when she was about to give up..Tyler told her that he likes her?..or...They both grow to like each other..but Allie won't admit it because she's afraid to get hurt.

tyler was so sweet when he hugged her! :)

Drama! I'm a drama whore. If you're going to get Allie and Tyler together, please let it be drama filled.

With your ideas:

1. Becoming more than friends.

2. Pretending to date or

3. Dating other people to make each other jealous.

I think if you're going to do #1, mix it in with #3, but other than that, I don't really mind. #2 would be interesting too.

You've got a great story here. I can't wait for the next chapter!