Reviews for Fat Filled Popcorn
MyDecoy chapter 11 . 9/6/2008

Loved it ]
bumblet chapter 11 . 8/16/2008
this is such a cute story, g'job! loved it.
rachelaine chapter 11 . 5/17/2008
it was a good story but i didnt like the ending. it just ended so abruptly. it was good though :)
Cantbelieveit chapter 11 . 5/11/2008

well i saw this story on someones favorites and the summary sounded like the kind of story i like to read. So i went ahead and did. Im sorry to say, but i have no idea why all of these people are saying that this story is amazing and they love it. While you have a good idea of a story the way you developed it wasnt good at all. It seems like its written by a pre-teen and its so cliche is hurts. Dont get me wrong, i absoulutly love cliche. But this was just wayy overloaded. And hosently some of it didnt make that much sense either- the many kisses were made to sound passionate and were abrupt which didnt help becuase then the ending kiss lost its spark. Also, the ending was rushed- the whole Lucas part coulda been more thorough. And what happens with rachel? Does Allie forgive her? Becuase in a way she did exactly what shellie did. Also, i didnt like how you made allie so perfect- everyone likes her, they all go for her ect. If she's had so many bfs then why cant she get over one and also then why does she have to practice. If hse likes tyler then why is he always the one making the moves? Why doesnt she?

You really need to think this story through and go through it again and edit as well as extend or at the very least tie up the loose ends. And please, oh please, try and make it more realistic yeah?
Hazelnut Romance chapter 11 . 4/7/2008
another great cliche! luv it.
Alenor chapter 11 . 1/31/2008
heya, this was a nice fic, cya later.
cherrypiesizzle chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
This story sounds so awesome! Off to read ;)
beautyleftthemblind chapter 5 . 12/31/2007
justcherica chapter 11 . 12/30/2007
hey, i really liked the story...

it was so cute.
Cupid's Jinx chapter 11 . 12/27/2007

That is so cute! I fluff it!



krystalle101 chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
i like your first chapter because it is not boring and it starts out really fun and without boring me
S.W.A.G chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
great story
cherrystraw chapter 11 . 8/22/2007
Aw! That was really cute! Keep writing!
PerfectChaos859 chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Hahaha this story is hilarious i really enjoyed the first chapter!
anacharlie chapter 11 . 7/29/2007
It's a really nice story. It's easy to read and funny. )

I'm sorry you don't like the ending and you finished it this way because you don't like the story anymore. It still is very good.
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