Reviews for Fat Filled Popcorn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() haha i like this story i cant beleive u dont like it and the ending was good not great but good im glad u finished it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know what i avent read the rest of this story but if i were to get those two together i would have allie and her ex fight and then tyler say they should pretend to date to make him jelious. i think it would be great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How awkward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...that's just fickle. E. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, she got out of Saw I, can't say I blame her! So...interesting, dating...so soon? Great job, E. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I was about to say, "How sweet, Tyler was man enough to help another person out even though she rejected him!" but you know because he's such an arrogant...what's the word I'm looking for?...jerk? All I can say is that he's an arrogant chuckler! That'll have to do...where are my brains these days? I like the name Imogene. "...but she's always bent he one with the best pranks." If I were you I'd check the spelling of 'bent he' ) "after school fro basketball tryouts" spelling (sorry if I'm hating, but I feel I can point it out without hurting your feelings) is a little tricky. As for Allie getting over Shelly and Kieran...well, I guess it was O.K. Now personally, I would like it if they learned to be friends first. Oh I don't have issues with short chappies, that's all I can really write ) E. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! Shelly...what nerve! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...why was she dating such a jerk in the first place? And Shelly should know better-chicks before dicks, right? Anyway, that basketball scene was only a little awkward... I loved it, E. |
![]() ![]() hey. i already reviewed but i wanted to review again cuz i got something to say. YOU FINISHED UR STORY ON 07.07.07! THE LUCKY THAT WONT OCCUR UNITL ANOTHER 100 YEARS&MY B-DAY! [: KK LATERS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shelly and Keiran got what was coming to them so I'm good with the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww so cute nd cheesy. [: i still loved it tho. if u ever decided to do a redo please alert me bout it or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it so far :) I can't believe her boyfriend!-or her 'best friend'. Some friend, right? Anyway, a few punctuation mistakes and 'realisation' is actually spelled realization. Other than that, I enjoyed the first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww so cute love it kinda short tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe that this story is over, but I enjoyed the ending nonetheless. Ü |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, happy ending! BTW thanks for giving a quick summary, it helped me out a lot. If you are going to make another story, please please please PM me when you are about to post it up so I can look for it. |