Reviews for Fat Filled Popcorn
smurf-love chapter 11 . 7/29/2007
haha i like this story i cant beleive u dont like it and the ending was good not great but good im glad u finished it!
smurf-love chapter 3 . 7/29/2007
you know what i avent read the rest of this story but if i were to get those two together i would have allie and her ex fight and then tyler say they should pretend to date to make him jelious. i think it would be great!
Kohlomere chapter 6 . 7/25/2007
How awkward!
Kohlomere chapter 5 . 7/25/2007
Wow...that's just fickle.

E.
Kohlomere chapter 4 . 7/25/2007
Well, she got out of Saw I, can't say I blame her!

So...interesting, dating...so soon?

Great job,

E.
Kohlomere chapter 3 . 7/25/2007
You know, I was about to say, "How sweet, Tyler was man enough to help another person out even though she rejected him!" but you know because he's such an arrogant...what's the word I'm looking for?...jerk? All I can say is that he's an arrogant chuckler!

That'll have to do...where are my brains these days?

I like the name Imogene.

"...but she's always bent he one with the best pranks." If I were you I'd check the spelling of 'bent he' )

"after school fro basketball tryouts" spelling (sorry if I'm hating, but I feel I can point it out without hurting your feelings) is a little tricky.

As for Allie getting over Shelly and Kieran...well, I guess it was O.K.

Now personally, I would like it if they learned to be friends first.

Oh I don't have issues with short chappies, that's all I can really write )

E.
Kohlomere chapter 2 . 7/25/2007
AH! Shelly...what nerve!
Kohlomere chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Wow...why was she dating such a jerk in the first place? And Shelly should know better-chicks before dicks, right?

Anyway, that basketball scene was only a little awkward...

I loved it,

E.
BiTTeRsWeeTcHoCoLaTe chapter 11 . 7/17/2007
hey. i already reviewed but i wanted to review again cuz i got something to say. YOU FINISHED UR STORY ON 07.07.07! THE LUCKY THAT WONT OCCUR UNITL ANOTHER 100 YEARS&MY B-DAY! [: KK LATERS
readergirl1 chapter 11 . 7/14/2007
Shelly and Keiran got what was coming to them so I'm good with the rest!
xjennnny chapter 11 . 7/14/2007
aww so cute nd cheesy. [: i still loved it tho. if u ever decided to do a redo please alert me bout it or something.
CK Shorty chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
I really like it so far :) I can't believe her boyfriend!-or her 'best friend'. Some friend, right? Anyway, a few punctuation mistakes and 'realisation' is actually spelled realization. Other than that, I enjoyed the first chapter.
Psycho's Angel chapter 11 . 7/8/2007
aww so cute love it kinda short tho
keepyourpantson chapter 11 . 7/8/2007
I can't believe that this story is over, but I enjoyed the ending nonetheless. Ü
into the black chapter 11 . 7/7/2007
Aww, happy ending! BTW thanks for giving a quick summary, it helped me out a lot.

If you are going to make another story, please please please PM me when you are about to post it up so I can look for it.
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