Reviews for Fat Filled Popcorn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() adslkngkLKJjklGDSLJKASKLJljk'JKLfjklasgjklL;; ...i pounded out my feelings on the keyboard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Justin had such a miniscule part in the chapter but I still thought he was absolutely adorable. Lol. On a more focused note, I can't wait for what's next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg How did she let that . All well Update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o its just getting more exciting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep he is most def. hot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I'd be shocked too. But Tyler does sound hot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol omg i love more soom plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I don't blame you for having shorter chapters...Writer's block is an SOB! But anyway...you need a tad bit more detail but this chapter did have some action! Happy Writings ForeverDancingInTheRain |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg...don't leave me hanging! i loved this chapter, but it was too short for me, lol. of course, even ten pages would be too short for me, haha. keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH NOZ WHATS HAPPENING NEXT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yup... biggest idiot to just so announce it to the whole world... but it happens not as unfortunate as this event though... haha really really good! have to update soon! can't wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh... cliff hanger! haaha... EVIL! ahehe.. nice piece of writing dude! all emo yet not cheesy! keep it up! and please update asap! i love it! n you! ahehehe... peace out! update asap please! xxeMiixx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my God, Allie really is the biggest idiot! I kind of feel bad for Shelly now. It looks like she really does like Kieran, and he had to do that! Asshole! If he really did it, and even if he didn't, he's still a asshole because he tried to hit on Allie! Good arguement between Tyler and Allie! I'm sorry I couldn't help you. I tried to answer your email, but when I finally got to the library, and stupid thing wouldn't let me! Please, email me if you need any help! I hope you're over your writer's block. They are the worst.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah! they can't part! seriously! OMGoodness.. I need your update for this. I'm seriously looking forward reading more of your story. Why did she screamed the last part! goodness.. tyler! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow, Allie... you really are. WTF? I don't even know what to say to that... but seriously, it's not like it's TOO bad, I mean, sure, She KNOWS now, but... heh. maybe you'll get into another shout fest with Tyler and he'll be forced to shut you up by kissing you again. *sigh* |