Reviews for grow up & go
lymli chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
I like the flow from this, things change.. it's a good story. heartfelt.

happy holidays.
Jezsh chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
I loved this, truly loved it. The only thing that threw me off a little was the change in form in the 5th stanza; I would have preferred it to stay in the same form as the rest. Still, it doesn't change what you're saying or how eloquently you've said it. It just reads beautifully.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
This is so beautiful. I absolutely adore it. I can barely articulate how well written, eloquent and moving this truly is. The ending is perfect, the shock of the addiction and the quiet butterfly-floating-away-esque apology at the end. I feel like I know him and yet see him from a kalidescope; twisted, fragmented (to use your wording) and tragically pieced together to make an impression. But that's the catch. This really does make an impression. Of him, of you, of the nature of human relations. I hate to be cliche and whip out the old "you don't know what you've got 'til it's gone," but I can't help but feel that you summed that up in six phenomonal stanzas.

On a side note (which feels sort of tacky, actually) I'd just like to say that I have not been on fiction press in ages, but your comments were so sweet and intelligent, I actually logged in just to return the favor. Thank you so much. And yeah, everything I wrote is true. I hope you can testify the same. I'd be disappointed if this wasn't real, though I'd definately commend your imagination.

Anyway, I might post more soon, if I do, I hope you'll find it equally pleasing. My style is more "It's Not So Hard To Be A Hero," now. Hmm. Who knows..?

And also, I saw Spiderman last night (the first one) for the first time (I was a fan of the comics and cartoons) and WOAH. It's bad how obsessed I am. Unfortunately, Spidey is a total metaphor for my ex. Bummer. Hah that's the way it goes, I guess. The new guy is Superman. I want to post about him, but I'm afraid he'd get the hint. Don't you hate awkward, creativity stifling things like that?

But yeah, keep it up. I can't wait to read more.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
Every line, building up to the last line, made me ache.

Then, that last line hit and, right now, my soul is actually typing this, not me.

Because you killed me with those last three line.

Oh, and, um, I adore this-it hurts in every way possible without really trying, it feels, seems, natural. '

- Noelle
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
the last lines make me ache.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
arent we all sorry for something

i knew a girl who walked into a train.

i think that was an awkward funeral
myno chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
I truly love this. Especially the last three lines that say it all so simply.
flies.like.decay chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
So... It was really Howard Jones who said no one is to blame. Lol. I love that song. Yes... I got through the first couple parts of the poem but I had to say that before I finisged reading it, so I guess I'll finish reading it and just say that what I read so far is good or something. :)
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
if i'm the first review that means my opinion is the only one that counts. if i'm a later review that means my opinion is the only one one that changes the first. if i'm the last review that means my opinion is the only one that counts.

iloveit.

when people flame or don't understand - there are two ways to take everything on this site. *hug* ... you will be good. yes you will. kaitiswatching.

-kait