Reviews for Hidden Agendas
CarlyJo chapter 4 . 4/16/2007
Awesome. It did sound like Natasha had it coming. YAY Jonni! UPDATE SOON!
CarlyJo chapter 3 . 4/13/2007
Great Story. I'm a little confused on the backgrond of the characters but I am definatly intriged. Update Soon!
Cinnamon Tea chapter 3 . 4/6/2007
oh geez... i'm falling in love with this story... it's so... idk... indescribable... i freakin love this story... ok.. wow... now i sound like a rabid fan girl whose vocabulary is at a minimum of 12 words... which it isn't but i'm at a loss for words simply put please update soon!
Ash chapter 3 . 4/6/2007
I love your story so far! It reminds me of the Black Donnelly's a little bit, but I love the fact that the protagonist is a teenage female. Update soon, I want to see if Owen gets a complete sentence in. :)
C. Fitzsimmons chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Interesting beginning. I like the way you introduced the characters here. Gave a good, if small, glimpse of them by showing instead of telling. Kudos for that. I wonder, though, where are the characters' parents? What brought them here? What do they do and just how do they get by at their age, living on their own?