|Reviews for Pencil|
| My.Writing.Is.My.Amulet chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Great job! I love pencils!
| Bri Neves chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Very good and unique. Keep writing. :)
| Tender Sugar chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
I adore this cinquain. A pencil is such a simple object, but the words you choose and the ending verb makes me want to remember never to take the ability to write for granted ever again ;]. Great job!
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Accurate description, and again I think the last line is perfect. Nice.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
I like the poem although I use pen. ;)
| Masked Soul chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
"Shortens with use" I know that all to well I started off with a new pencil one day and by the time I had finished writing well the pencil finished too lol that's why i prefer writing in pencil you see your progress not only on the turning pages but also in the shrinking pencil nice job it's on the favs list
| Definition chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Aww, I love the idea. I find it pleasant and strangely cute
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
I have always prefered ink pens to pencils, unless it's working with wood or building something. It's sad when a pencil runs out and has to be tossed. Let's just hope we made good use of it before its life comes to an end.
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
now i have the urge to write all my poems by hand lol
(sorry for the late review- i was on a bit of a hiatus)
"Ready to write, eager to please" made me giggle :]
| CandleQueen chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Most of my pencils are chewed on. _'
Nice though. Like when it said "eager to please."
| SpeedingCars8 chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
i love that you took a lifeless object and gave it personality. great writing!
| Gripe chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
This is so oddly cute. It made me giggle. :3
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Pencil is an artist's and a writer's best friends. This really inspired me to write something. God job!
| Methuselah Renard chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
Ah, the pencil, a sketcher and writer's best friend. The cinquain nicely sums it up.
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
And now I feel like writing something. Well, why not? (pauses and waits for idea)
I'll think of something.
I like the idea behind this, the fact that it inspires you, and the way it is short, sweet, and to the point. Nice work!