Reviews for Porcelain
MarvellousMarvin chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
oh that was good! especially the last three lines. i also loved the imagery of cracks and being hollow and painting back on the face. loved it all!
jojoba-music-girl chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
I really really loved this one! Especially the last three lines! Great work, it'll go into my favourites!
TeapotLid chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Nice allegory with the doll, very artsy and twistedly pretty, if that works, hah. Suitably disturbing imagery, well done! - interesting 'pregnant barbie' sidenote - good work.
mindOFdeliriousUNREST chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
oh, this is angsty, good, and nasty all rolled into one. the punctuation is good- it breaks up the poem well. nice job.

paz,

-the delirious one
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
No one would want a doll like me either...this was very awesome, very original. I really liked the idea of the paint running in the rain...wow, awesome job! Props for doing something different!
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
I really like this piece. You painted a very clear picture and I like the symbolism that (I think) you showed. I like poetry such as this that can be interpreted into different meanings. Some of my favorite lines are:

"And they all know that you are hollow inside.

Fake would be an understatement;

In the rain, your colors melt and run like tears,

And you paint your face back on like it's okay."

Excellent work!